I like this book, keep pushing author, I'm right behind you.
Truly a captivating story. Your story is far mysterious, which makes me curious. There's this secret organization and inheritance stuff, it will catch the interest of the cultivation reader's interest.
Although the MC is good , but how can one story have 2 mc , you are trying to create 2 mc , which is very for every Story .In any story there can be one mc . Other can be supporting characters or side characters
"Ah what? Okay i go now." Nursed left the room.
rare)
"I'm glad you are okay! I thought you were gone forever." She finally confessed.
"No, no it's fine… well, in the fight I had before coming to this dimension against Cell, he fired a large energy wave, similar to my Kamehameha but less powerful at someone called Vegeta… I jumped in front of the attack before it could hit Vegeta as I believed he would not survive the attack at his current power level… fortunately we both survived the attack but my left shoulder was a mess to the point I was having to finish the fight with only one arm" Gohan explained to his friends while thinking back on it,I still can't believe Vegeta apologized to me that day...never thought I would hear those words come out of his mouth…
"No."
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
The night before the change, Nick has just finished up his nightly workouts. 'Phew. I finally managed to do 40. It'll have to do. I should rest up so I'm prepared for whatever tomorrow may bring.' He decided to sleep on his bed tonight, after sleeping on the couch for the past few days, to make sure he is well rested, and doesn't wake up sore.
Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
So much to do, so much to see