Story started out pretty good, but took a dive at around chap 14 for me. Starts to turn inconsistent and the time skips are miss placed which takes away from the story for me.
Ok , earlier i was trying to post a comment but wouldn’t post it☹️ good thing i tried again ?well just started reading the story and i love it already❤️ loving the strong fl she’s a genius i hope she wont go back to that scammy ex and he’s not the ml?
? the story follows Kael, a hard-working young fellow, who seems to develop in every chapter, and his BB Lira, who might not be in the future ?but now it is?
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I love rebirth story with the FL and/or ML learning from their mistake from their previous life. I really hope the FL will be strong, witty, intelligent and someone who can’t be reckon with. It would be very frustrating if the FL goes through a rebirth process but she still makes the same mistakes by being a pushover and be fooled as a pawn. I hope this won’t be the case in this book. But, for now with 10 chapters, so far it’s interesting enough to read on.
The story and plot are both overall fantastic the story of course has a few typos amd homophone confusions ... Nonetheless it is fantastic so far
Hmmm...Based on the first chapter alone:Apocalypse, reborn, and FL with a portable space that can store things and grow food—very similar to the apocalypse novel written by ColorfulAutumnWind.
This is quite a good read, it is adventurous, mysterious, sometimes funny and it has a lot of action, sometimes drama, twists and overall a fun pack of everything you want, as a story and has potential. Keep going!
honestly as for this story it's ridiculously slow paced and Author already trying to make privilege chapters to a story that has gone nowhere yet not to mention author is a big flake wants to charge privilege on other novel at 30 chapters but will write 10 if that and disappear. I do like the Strongest Mage story and characters even overlook the countless errors in every area from characters background changes to simple math. I don't know why web novel doesn't drop down the privilege # when author doesn't produce and I'd suggest not starting a new novel by this author when he is extremely flaky on his main one besides the fact this novel feels like it will take 200 chapters to feel like it's gone anywhere sad but true. Little advice never buy privilege from this author unless you have 30 chapters unread to actually make it worth it don't expect 30 chapters to be written happy reading everyone ?
The story is so good for few chapters . I will wait for few more chapters to decide whether i read it further or not.
Quite an interesting story to read , need more updates ☺️
have to say I'm impressed , at what my mind can create?