Great storytelling, looking forward to what's next in the coming chapters.
best novel ever...make it 1500-2000 chapters novel please
Grammar: Quite bad. For example the author forgot to n’t at the end of isn’t writing only is.Story: Not bad.MC: He saved a girl that was disappearing
Immersive and wholesome. Those are the two words they come into my mind while reading this book. Right from the beginning the author just builds up this amazing world that comes to life as you continue reading. I highly recommend this book to everyone
There are lots of grammatical errors but the book is still readable so that's okay. The story is great, makes you wonder what will happen in the next chapter. Good work!
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This hit too close to home. I won't say which part since it is personal but I really can understand the MC.Never I thought I will see a story this close to my life in this app, hahahaha I have no idea what to say now.So, well, here is 5* from me.
Starts face-slapping left and right. Im fine with arrogant characters if they’re smart like scoring the sacred body mc. but this book is just painful
The story has potential. It had me hooked from the prologue. So far the pacing is good. Not too fast nor too slow. The action flows well. The only gripe I had with it was the slow releases but it seems that has changed recently. Anyways I’m definitely looking forward to this one.
So the novel lies in the synopsis and it gets confusing using weird statements like the Cantonese school and kendama body and doesn’t bother explaining either of those and when it says this is 10k return system that will give only 2 times rewards it doesn’t make sense
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zehahaha sounds interesting, anyone have the raw?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,