PROJECT: K4-712

The story is very good and likeable                                                                                                        

Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More

truly an underrated novel ,it has quite good aspect in all sector its writing quality is good ,characters are likeable ,mc is quite dark but not an absolute edgelord ,it also has some humor albeit it is dark overall i will give it 4.9 , it will be 5 if update would have been daily.

Good read ! Can't say anything about the update stability right now but the mc is quite interesting want to see what's going to happen next  .....................guys I say that try this novel the starting story is quite good and I sure wanna know whether he can become a bloodline warrior

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Ah you see, i don't very good with English.So, what can i tell for you ... Your novel have own unique thing, and now it's depends on you...How you using this weapons ??? If you can using this weapons, development of story novel Will have good way from myriad of ideas can you add it on story'.....Sorry for my bad grammar because i'm not speaking English he...he...he...And confusing review on your novel