Seems fitting the first review should be a shameless one by the author. Like this comment if you agree on its rating, and I hope you enjoy reading!
Yo yo yo wtf yo yo yo . I demand some complex romance drama(harem) . That much should be expected of the author . Also I want the MC do some slaughters here and there . We can have some wars as well .The more blood and murder the better . If it is possible make the MC a little like Fang yuan from Reverend insanity . Someone who uses anyone to achieve what he wants.If it is possible that is . Other than that best of luck .
I want a Fastpass, fastpass is Life
A good fanfic. Its a good read for passing time. Please update chapters faster.
Self-Assessment of My WorkI’ve just realized that I can do a self-assessment, so here’s my take on my work so far.I think it’s turned out pretty well. The premise is interesting, and I’ve worked hard to make the characters stand out as unique individuals, rather than just background NPCs. I try to give each character their own distinct personality to make them memorable.There are a lot of details in the story, but I try to balance them with the pacing so it doesn’t overwhelm the reader. Even though the themes can be heavy at times, the reading experience flows well and isn’t too hard to follow.Of course, there might be the occasional small writing mistake here and there. I’m not a native English speaker, but I always do my best to correct any errors I find.I’m always open to questions and suggestions. However, I can’t guarantee I’ll add every suggestion, as I only make changes that fit with the direction I’ve already planned for the story.Overall, I’m happy with what I’ve created. I think it has a lot of potential, and I’d definitely recommend giving it a chance.
Great story and characters. Nice kingdom building and world building! It is fairly new so I would wait if you want to binge read. As for the author, thank you for the great story and also if you don’t mind me asking, is the story a no-harem story or a harem one?
The world-building is excellent. The genre is actually dark and serious, but the author spices up the plot with comedy.
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The story is really good and so are the characters introduced so far, especially Luel. you've got a pretty solid story author, hope you keep updating..
It's a pretty good story, solid character development and world building and don't even get me started on the Villian, Datubo is seriously messed up and not to mention Niyanlafu and his twisted little mind games. Highly recommended.
this is such a great story, the first few chapters will bore you but trust me it will get super good. author pls don't stop posting this wonderful work
What a gripping start to a fantasy novel! The author's ability to paint vivid imagery with words is commendable, and I was immediately drawn into the world of Japanese-style writing. Well, I recommend it to anyone who likes to watch anime. Give it a try you won't regret it.