Rise of the 90s Hot Mom

Common man it's unfair Post some more chapters please!!!I can't wait 2 days just please!!!!One of the best stories I have read it has potential to be one of the greatest anime if converted The only thing I can't understand is names (lol)It's not my fault it's just.... Too hard but yeah I did it after reading all of the chapters I can say that it's awesome Keep going ????

Website : qidian chinaViews : 14.22millionRating : 9.2(1937)Chapters : 980 approxStatus : completed Word count : 3.75million author level : platinum No of works : 6Disscussion : 18495Year started : 2008Chinese title : 网游之近战法师

I'd probably give my own story here 3.7-4-ish stars, writing quality has a few past/present tense mistakes, some writing errors and confusing sentences, and overly repeated words, but is mostly clear and 'enjoyable' to read. I think I did an okay job on the action, but I don't have enough experience with that to tell.There will only be one chapter for this. So obviously 5-stars.I only gave myself 3 stars for story development, as it's too short a story to really test any natural/interesting developments, developed as expected, maybe did an above-average job explaining things.I personally found the characters fun, and was somehow able to give them slightly different personalities in such a short story, nothing too multilayered. Can't really brag, but I think I made some fun, fairly well-written characters.I had lots of details fleshed out for the plot, world, city names, history, blah blah that didn't really fit in. Given how short the story is, I'm not going to be too harsh on myself over not being super detailed. Though I will say I should've described the fauna/landscape of the area and at least attempted to depict the alien world outside of a single building.Thanks for reading my review of my own story, now take off your pants and I'll give you a cookie.

At first you think that the story is bit slow and the description is provided by the author seems bit too much but after some chapters you see the same at everything.in every scenario when the people are bad mouthing the female lead there are same feeling in each and every chapter you get bored easily....The male lead always harass the female lead but she doesn't do anything even her thoughts are not clearly described by the author....

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