"That hag. So that's why those hoodlums trashed the kids camp last week…" Bennox looked at the note and an address was written on the back. Smirking, Bennox thought of a plan. "They want to profit off of us? Well, let's see if they can!"
"What is wrong with her?" Don asked.
It was the Royal Palace of Water Nation. the place was guarded by Jonnin level Ninjas 24x7 just to ensure Water Daimyo's safety. although Nations leaders like Daimyo's did not play a major part in the elemental world when it comes to Water Nation things bit different than the rest.
Aurum looked up at her brother, silently asking if she should go or not. Argent nodded, giving her permission. Before she left, she whispered to her brother, "It was the first princess' ruse."
This message no longer seems relevant given how old this novel is, but I will say it nonetheless. A few years ago I fell into the slippery slope of Japanese fiction, I started with innocent anime like One Piece, Dragonball, and Naruto, but then I started to read manga, and eventually that lead into light novels. Of course that path would eventually lead to this website, where you and myself most likely have found our source of entertainment. In the beginning when I joined this community and would indulge myself in the vast repository that this website has, most of the novels followed a basic structure of power growth that typically started from a weak point and eventually becoming one of the strongest. This was changed however with new implementations in this website that fostered fan-fictions and with it came a genre that I believe essentially removed a year of my social life: wish fulfillment. I often see these new fan-fictions or even originals sometimes that literally have the main character given whatever they want. I presume these stories are largely self-inserts and based off of what the author themselves want. I would like to emphasize this before I continue: ---->I am not speaking from a place of authority and thus do not believe that reading these are bad for everyone<----, but in my experience ever since I have started reading these wish fulfillment stories I realize that, in a snowball effect, I have become essentially addicted to these writings. I would go hours on end looking for a new novel that would feed my need for an "overpowered character". Often I found myself ashamed to show people what I was reading on my phone, and this cemented the idea even further that I should not continue to be a part of this "community". I am sure there are some good parts of this website, many have good stories and character development, but right now this website is not built to incentive that, and thus these crappy yet addicting SI fan-fictions run rampant. I wrote this just in the off likely chance that someone sees this and they found themselves in a similar situation that there are other people just like you. After I am finished writing this I will delete everything from the library and maybe I'll read a book with genuine literary merit. Also, I understand people might hate this and feel free to vent in the comments. This message will be posted on all my other shitty novels that I wrote when I had a bad idea for a book.
"I knew you're gonna be surprised, boy! Hahahahaha!" laughed Butcher out loud as he saw Wang Tao's reaction
The start was nice, the background was actually interesting for me but the chapters were so short, and most of them were like fillers that you could skip and it won’t affect the story. The dialog of the characters were boring. Sorry but this is not for me. I wish you good luck author. I hope you improve and if possible you can rewrite the novel when that time comes.
This narrative is a remarkable achievement, captivating from start to finish. The author’s exceptional storytelling is evident in the multidimensional characters and intricate plot. Every twist and turn kept me engaged, making it difficult to stop reading. The writing is both refined and accessible, painting vivid images that pull you into the author’s world.
This book is a phenomenal read, mesmerizing from the first page to the last. The author’s mastery of storytelling is evident in the well-rounded characters and intricate plot. Each twist and surprise kept me on edge, making it hard to stop reading. The prose is both lyrical and straightforward, painting vivid images that draw you into the author's world.
I can say that I enjoy novels that not only focus on developing the main character (MC) but also invest in the growth of other characters. The author assigns a significant role to each character. Not all conflicts with main villains are resolved by the MC, which provides a clear sense of power balance within the story. Unlike most fantasy hero stories, where the MC, starting as a low-class character, inevitably triumphs over higher-class adversaries through plot armor, this novel is different. The disparity in strength between class E and class SS is distinctly portrayed. I appreciate the character interactions in the novel and believe the author excels at world-building. By introducing the main villain early on, it's evident that the author has a clear vision for the story's future. The main villain is intriguing as well. In some instances, the author executes plot twists effectively, though there are times when twists seem to be included for shock value without proper development or foreshadowing. Additionally, I find that the MC's rival, initially portrayed as strategic and intelligent, evolves into a muscle brain character, suggesting that the author may have changed his/her approach to the rival's character. The same is true for some other characters, who appear to deviate from their initial portrayal, almost as if they have become different characters later. Overall, the story is about an MC who transmigrates into an extra student that was originally only can achieve C class power and could not develop further. As an orphan, the original MC was a dungeon seeker who gave up on seeking revenge against the main villain, who is the crown demon prince, due to the vast disparity in power. But in this new timeline, having gained knowledge of the future before transmigrating, the MC chooses to seek power and revenge by taking some opportunities that originally belonged to the protagonist. The intent sword skill that the MC acquires causes him to lose his emotions, which worries both him and his lover. The original protagonist is revealed to be despicable and has actually used heavenly luck to destroy humanity itself. The real story is that the MC’s rival is the world’s will choosen one, which tries to counter the original protagonist but fails and dies. In the new timeline, the rival becomes a friend of the MC. Meanwhile, the original protagonist fails to gain power, and many character who have bad fate due original protagonist, have different fate due MC intervene. I can say that this novel is a blend of modern hero and dungeon fantasy, infused with elements of cultivation from Chinese novels.
This is really a shame, i liked this book a lot. But it taught me a lesson. From now on I'm going to check the authors profile, if they have a tendency to drop their stories, I'm not going to bother reading their books.
i think i’m starting to like this story?