grasina18
Around 40 chapters inI honestly had high hopes going to this story and it started out pretty good decent premise guy goes into a tribal society has to implement some degree of modern day thinking but he's not some sort of genius who automatically knows everything unlike a lot of other protagonists a pretty good start. Unfortunately it take the downturn shortly after the beginning you have first of all the goblin women basically all being supermodels I mean I can appreciate the idea of sexualizing goblins but at the same time the whole idea of them being goblins is that they are distinctly not human additionally as it goes on after the initial crisis in the story they start showing that not only do they have individual skills which is something you'd expect from a tribal society but then they go on to show that they are actually masters or prodigies even when compared to people in the outside world and I'm like how how did they reach this this is not on the level of a tribal society anymore this is on the level of like a fractured civilization and that is going against kind of the initial premise that the author was trying to set forth. The author introduces the demon King element into the plot line pretty much really early on after like the initial one or two crisis and they haven't really established themselves very much or even the outside world very much having really no interaction with the outside world in the protagonist is going oh I have an ominous feeling that we need to deal with this demon king figure even though they have no idea what really the history of this world is. I will go on and say that the novel is not bad, but it is not good either there are many other novels of the similar premise and have the whole goblin thing going on that do a better job or at least aim for more realistic goal point without trying to do everything if you really want something from the goblin archetype I can't say this is a bad choice but I honestly just can't give this series anymore thought because there's so many other things more interesting that are available author I wish you luck in the future but I recommend trying to solidify your storytelling base before expanding outward and try to get a hold of your character development than a much more straightforward manner. Good luck
Only just started but the story already seems great. I can see where the author is trying to take this with all the mysteries that are looming.
What time is it ? When I can find your update ? See you next chapter Morena
well, develop storyline , interesting character and very eloquent writing.
recommend, a very good story no regrets.
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the book is really interesting, the ideas are fresh and new. I love it.?????
Very good book. I like how the author effortlessly blends historical fantasy and romance together. Only a good writer can pull that off. Also, this is not just your average fantasy story about werewolves, alphas, vampires or even a system but it brings a new perspective entirely to fantasy writing. I highly recommend and look forward to more chapters!?
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
A gripping tale that kept me hooked from start to finish.
Alright here is my review.Ask any questions you have here.
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