FloxyBelle
This book was a real page-turner! I couldn't put it down. The atmosphere was incredibly dark and suspenseful, and the twists and turns kept me guessing. The characters were complex and intriguing, and the writing was sharp and atmospheric. Highly recommend it to fans of action, anti hero.
I'd honestly say you just have to tread it to judge it yourself.?
For those looking for a great story involving Harem and Systems, this is the right book for you.
no idea, writing this for fp...............
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
The story has a good start. A concise plot.
Elijah's reaction when he fofound out Oliver's dead is so sad
A novel belonging in the fantasy category completely, this is due to the inconsistent knowledge used by the MC and the random resources generated with it. An example is to obtain clay the MC mixes soil with water which is possible to do, but then uses the clay to create an oven or maybe it was a forge 3x the size of the last one he had at the family keep without a time skip or any real explanation how it was established within a short period. The world background might have been stated at some point in the future of the story I just never got to it. MC is never given any details or anyone for that matter besides relation to MC. The story has no driving factor for the MC. It seemed the MC died at the start of the story could only assume heart attack or stoke maybe due to trauma, but arrives in new world with no signs of that happened. In addition sentece structuring is questionable at best and might need a rewrite (this is coming from me, which struggles with English too).
Shameful 5 stars!Though there are only 6 chapters, I think I should at least give the first review to give a general idea for dear readers!Welcome to the unholy relationship between a priest and demon~ It's a bit of a slow burn so things won't be developing fast between our dear lovers, at least not in the first volume!Sadly, I don't have much to say because I don't want to spoil it for you, but I promise you it will be a fun ride hehe~Thank you for picking my novel & I hope you will love it~
I didn't like it to be honest, MC is as dumb as a rock and his system is way overpowered and can't let you be emerged in the story, the world building is ...well not good... anyway U didn't like it... and thanks
Hello!I am the author of this book..I am an amture writer, no doubt about that but like always I have poured out my soul in to this. I really appreciate you reading this.
gran historia lastima que tarda en actualizar los capitulos
