Loving the characters and the fact that it does what it says and doesn't have random stuff unrelated happening as of yet up to chap 55 rn. although there are a lot of new characters they are at least given background or storyboarding to their person quickly and feel like part of the main cast quickly
Please give this novel a shot. This is a great VRMMO novel with funny characters and cool moments. Where the king's avatar did not have world-building in Glory, this novel has lots of world-building within the VRMMO world.
One of the most fun cheat based works I've read in a while. A load of laughs. I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.I cheat at writing. I cheat at writing.
Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job.However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable.Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!
I like books about farming.But I also like MC's that are smart and thoughtful and hard-working. All of that is true in this book, even though sometimes there's not as much farming as I would like. Definitely not an overpowered MC and so many tense adventures await.
