Relieve stress my a**! 1st chapter and I'm already stressed wtf.
A great premise, not to boring but not too over the top, its taken well throughout the eleven chapters given and im sure the author is cooking with something. Though that said there is still room for improvement, like in every creative work out there, master your craft and dont give up dear author
Beautiful! Absolutely Beautiful!
I am a fan of clear writing, with the capturing of proper details and an inviting edge that keeps the audience begging for the relief of thrill.
I must say that this is a work of art. You know sometimes, true Horror is not the monster in the closet. But the one in the mind.
Truthfully, this book calls him out.
truly beautiful...
I admit that I Shamelessly gave my story a 5-star review. So what?
I hope you guys enjoy reading this story as I will put in my utmost effort to make the novel pleasing to read so I hope whoever read this novel to not give up on it thanks ?
Bruh Dragons in this Novel talk about balance but then kill for no reason other then their hurt pride thousands of years ago?♂️??????????
I'm confused, is the MC a reincarnated person or not? because MC is too smart for just a baby but at the same time dumb to be a reincarnated person i mean if he is a reincarnated person why would he not know that drawing with an index finger is easier than holding it with 5 fingers. i gave you 5 star Author so at least give me an explanation.
GUYS, I FIXED MY MISTAKE!CHAPTERS 01 TO 40 ARE NOW FREE TO READ ON VOLUME 00!!!You can follow up from Ch41 on regular volume 01, without having to worry about paying for chapters so early on the story.Enjoy!!!
The overall plot is good but the chapters should be free as Web novel is charging coins for reading chapters considering the poor English translation and overall poor quality of the translation
Hilarious story with loveable characters, most especially the MC. Great writing!
The grandmaster-level wizard protagonist is killed, and his spirit transcends dimensions into a body devoid of magic, but this body turns out to have the ultimate potential for magical training, even more suitable than the protagonist's previous form. With a wealth of knowledge in his head, he gradually selects and trains with the new body, step by step. The goal is clearly to become the king of wizards. It's very entertaining and a smooth read.
Hello there, here is the author. It's become a tradition to do self-reviews here on this site, so I won't be the one to break it...
In this little review, I want to talk about the 5 points you can find when making your own review.
But before that, I want to say that originally the novel will be divided into volumes, which should reach the mark of 8-10 volumes at the end.
Anyway, let's get down to business.
Writing quality: English is not my first language, so there will certainly be some mistakes, but I will endeavor to improve this whenever possible. Therefore, I thank you in advance for any correction indicated.
Update stability: Although I have my own activities, which can prevent me from writing daily, but I have an abundance of chapters ready. So, I can guarantee that, at least in the coming months, there will be at least one chapter being released each day. As for a higher release rate or extra chapters, this will depend on the votes received by the novel.
Story development: There are major and minor plots in the story that will be developed little by little. The speed of progression can be quite varied, in some points it will be a little slower and in others it will be faster. This depends on the importance of each part to the overall story.
Character design: For certain reasons, the protagonist will be very intelligent from the beginning of the story. But he is still a person who needs help and who has room for improvement. There will also be some problems so that the character has a certain space to mature, so you can expect some changes to happen...
World background: You can expect a lot of information from this world that the MC is in. Whenever I'm writing, I try to make it clear in the text what situation the protagonist is in. Where is he? What is the difference in strength for your opponents? What's outside the protagonist's realm? How is the world where he is? Races... Etc.
Anyway, there is certainly a lot of space to be explored.
Well, I think that's it. This is my first time writing, so I'm still learning...
Anyway, I hope the story is satisfactory!
the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well....I just waste my time reading this!!!!