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This is definitely the longest book I've ever read, and possibly the best. I don't even care about the fact that you copy pasted it. I watched a few episodes of the drama but decided to read the book, and after finishing this I can see how much better the drama would be if it wasn't censored. I love this.
If you like transmigration stories where main character is not a beta, and a pushover, and you are searching for romance in another world theme this might be it, it can be gore on some chaps, because the world building which gets established as the chapters go on. What I like most are the characters and the recent chapter just got me, as the author suddenly killed someone I thought that would be a long term side character, but I guess he was just not. But I'm feeling more for the story as it goes on, it's packed with emotions in it. Chapters vary in lengths but they are all satisfying.I recommend these to isekai lovers, I loved it, you'll love it too. Supporting you author! Keep updating! I'm loving the chapters!
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I'm going to give you 4 stars. I have only read ten chapters, but the book seems pretty good. The characters are well describe and there are also some funny scenes. I'm waiting more from you, Author-Sama.
It is very interesting I feel like I'm not reading a translated novel but a full on english novel. The way the author use his words to describe the story and the narration is all on top level. The story development is also straight to the point, well atleast it doesn't use up 3 chapters just to describe what MC is doing, in like some wuxia novels - won't name names. I don't want be hunted haha. A lot of twist and turns, in a very exciting and thrilling way. Whew, so much to say but you just gonna have to read the novel yourself to know what I'm talking about. ✌
I enjoy reading it....but yeah that's that...I wonder if the mc include legal/illegal loli?? hahaha anyway I think its better if the copy skill include a function like erase or just replace other skill not add a limited one?
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Alright, this book is really good and wilm get you hooked in.Spoilers - - - -The title is a little clickbaity, he won't remain a magician for long. Other than that the other part is something you would notice from his first life, and stuff about his first life missing in his second. The characters are a little consistent but the world background is a little inconsistent, it's a great book tho, peace.
I m doing this bcs is literally not coherent, yeah that's all. They story line make us reader confused alot.- Times skip = 5 years later but his skill and level still low after what we see at first times he level up is feel like a lie.- His personality is kinda vague.- The story focus make us kinda confused.
Now, I was genuinely intrigued upon reading the start of the novel. The main character was very interesting, and the world had a lot of potential. However, I feel like the author barely did anything with any of that.Enter Me! The Skillionaire Says In Parentheses is a story about a girl whos name I can't remember. A hyper-intelligent barely-sane experimental subject. Using her absurd prowess, she is able to very quickly rise in power in hopes to dominate the world.Writing quality is really good. There is a LOT of references in this novel, along with a fair bit of poetry. Far above average for this site. (5/5 stars)Story development is the first major flaw. While the story direction is interesting, it feels like the author creates a new plot point/direction with a lot of potential then doesn't do anything with it. This story has gone a little everywhere and has done next to nothing with any of it. Because of this, the story simultaneously comes off as extremely chaotic and extremely boring. (2/5 stars)Character design is decent. Above-average. The main character is definitely unique. The side characters are pretty good, but it doesn't feel like theres a whole lot of focus on some of them. (4/5 stars)World background. From the content alone, it's worthy of five stars. However the way they introduce is it is extremely annoying. It is a perpetually increasing stream of info-dumping. I find myself almost falling asleep listening to some random character ramble on about some obscure information that I doubt will be relevant. The author introduces too much information too fast. (3/5 stars)Overall, a novel good for it's world-building depth and writing quality, but not much else. Everything else can be described as passable but the story gets rather boring, especially later on. Parts of the novel feel like the author forgot the plot and focused exclusively on world-background. I give this novel 3.8 stars out of 5.
CRITICAL REVIEW Read 181 chaps; easy binge---------------------------------------------------I came for the Harem. Didn't get the shenanigans, but delightfully stayed for the story. I'm honestly surprised. It was actually quite good read. It can't be said to be sensational, nor a masterpiece, but in webnovel standards it's very high up imo. Probably within my top 8 on this site. As expected from an author who has done many successful books on this site. I've read one of his early books and the quality is so different from this book which surprised me. It's easy to read, it flows nicely, the story isn't complicated and quite straightforward. The improvement of his writing is clear as day. I'm lenient with giving stars, but this is an easy 5 stars. I barely hesitated to give it even if I'm soft.I also applaud the author for making the story not feel forced or a mess when you have these awesome moments where lots of characters become present in one scene. It's actually kinda hype! Another thing I appreciated was that the journey for the MC never goes smoothly especially pre 100 chapters. Characters in the story are well fleshed out for the most part, especially the main cast. It doesn't feel as if one has more development over the other which is great. Though Yovana could've been handled much better. I really wished there was better foreshadowing for what she brought to the story. I also wish we had a more heart to heart with her like the rest of the cast.If there is a need for improvement then it would definitely be Powers. When it comes to powers in the novels that's where the novel has its biggest weakness because it's vague and never explained in detail. However this story is more emphasised on the journey of the cast and its simple plot. Honestly detailed information of powers and being faithful isn't really necessary and the ambiguous power scaling and such really doesn't detract me from my reading at all with how THIS story is written.I hope this story does not go on for too long because this book would be best short. Moreover, despite being someone who loves happy endings, a bittersweet ending would be something to really consider even though it would be bitter. It may really upset alot of people, but honestly with what you have done. I think it can make the story really meaningful. I will probably even cry if it's done right. I am very happy to have read this story! I am very eager to read more and hope the quality doesn't drop because its 180 chaps in it's still quite good!Now this wouldn't be a review of mine if I didn't ship at the end of the review.Well honestly 180 chaps in there's hardly any romance which was surprising as I kinda came for the harem tag. But I love how the story turned out. Screw the harem nonsense! What's written already is lovely. I really fear that trying to add romantic drama or forced relationships will just taint the story. LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlas LilithxAtlasAtlas is the type to be faithful to 1 girl. Don't complicate it with adding more! From what has occurred, their relationship still needs a long way to go (romantically) and it really needs to be fleshed out and treaded carefully. Their relationship after all is complex and complicated and the few wholesome scenes or rather better to say teetee (Japanese slang) is definitely not enough to be convincing and realistic. You have the capability! Don’t disappoint me!
Its another OP Mary Sue character. too much plot armor, gets strong immediately, and I predict no character growth. I understand he is supposed to be an OP character, but the story isnt structured to compensate for it. With no adversities, what do we have? A novel meant to be a power fantasy of the author.
