mo86
Please just bring back old novels such as Transcendent Dawn. These new novels are such low quality that it makes me lose braincells. Anyway, PLEASE BRING BACK TRANSCENDENT DAWN
Don't read! Not worth your time, your brain will die instantly on the first chapter.Seriously your brain will really die. Webnovel already screwed this up big time along with having no paragraphs no explanation to what's going on.
Story heavily uses dialogues to tell it's story, a style that I myself use while writing and quite interesting how you integrated past and present as the scene roll out. I liked the mystery surrounding the novel and I am excited to see how everything unfolds. I am thoroughly enjoying reading this and will be waiting on the upcoming chapters :)
Really good novel. If you find chaos funny, then this is for you. Words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words.
Just one question. Is this novel about Max's training and gaining more power( maybe with kingdom building kind of stuff) or is it just about Max becoming a good solider who will more or less follow commands?
wanna read a fk overpowered mf withevery knowledge, this the book for you. come here and read Lucas a five year old rising thru the top.....
development of high quality worlds.★★★★★ . so far all the worlds he has traveled to have proved to be lived out in the reader's imagination and not something totally strange to read.
Premise seems fun, you imagine it is gonna be a world hopping series with scientific research in it. Than comes some unasked patriotism (in a parallel world!), you say whatever if the story is good.Than my man starts cultivating ?!? soo unasked for but okay story might be goo-Gets everything he could ever get and might ever want to get right away after the end of first life. All of this happens in 13 chapters.Than 2nd life starts, chapter 40 and he in a parallel world made it so that, there is China and he is the king of it. Everybody cultivates, 0 brain usage, he is the Mary sue etc. don't waste your time and brain reading this
A lot of similarities to SWALLOWED STAR. The story so far is bad. He has at least 3 pets but basically, all of them disappeared.
Had some hope when I first started. But it very quickly went from being a bit ridiculous to just plain stupid. MC instantly start a huge power up arc that has nothing to do with farming. Might read more later but at the moment it is a waste of time
This ls actually good novel good story and good character development all of it, definitely recommend this novel and as a newbie creating a novel might as well use this too see and improve on how to write and do things when writing novel.
I like this book.It's enjoyable to read. Good job, author. ?Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
