this is shockingly alot better than i expected, and ill be honest i was on the fence reading this because of the title, anyway.story dialogue especially starts out a little rough, and it kinda still is, the creation of things is also a little off to say the least. but if you look past that the story flows really nicely, and this novel doesnt really focus on the creation of technology so i cant really fault a guy for not caring about something he is not interested in. good novel