Loving this story, please continue writing it.
Okay, okay, I really don't know why a book like this isn't swarming up wiith readers yet, guess cause it just starting though.At first I was like.. Yeah, okay, a system book, sounds thrilling, but the moment I read the plot, it really changed everything, literally ??My mouth is widened, I really, really don't know how to describe the love I have for this book, am just loving this ??I mean, c'mon, just two chapters I have read so far and this book is just wow...like men, this is so goooood ??...The plot alone already did it all, eye catching, it drew my attention in the book...Author I feel like am possessed with it, I really do love this book, a lot ??...So glad it already has like a 50 chapter already, can't wait to binge read this, chapters here I come ??I have no problem with it, it really deserves the five stars
Hey everyone! I just gave my story a five-star rating because I genuinely believe in its potential. If you’re a fan of the novels extra or author’s pov, I encourage you to give this one a try. Your reviews mean a lot to me, so please feel free to share your thoughts, and constructive criticism is always welcome!Thank you for taking the time to read my work!P.S. If your review contains spoilers, please make sure to include a warning beforehand.
i got an idea and i wanted to share It with you, when we get more ahead with the story, by that i mean many hundreds if the story Is short, or thousands if the story Is long, would you add the universe to the story? for example various races (ex. elfs, dragons,ecc.) or even unique races that don't exist already and each has their own Power system, talents, maybe higher and lower races that have vast difference in innate strenght, (like the difference between a dragon and a wyvern for example), maybe even galaxies, gods that reign those galaxies and dimensions ( for example First to 4th dimension), humans reside in the First, second dimension other races live, and the same with the 3rd and 4th, in each dimension time flows differently, and the Door trails are bringing people in those other dimensions, i know It sounds like a Grand but stupid idea, but i believe if you Plan everything carefully, the story would become many times Better than It already Is. Hope this idea of mine can help you.?ps. i Just realised i wrote 1k words, Sorry about that lol
I like it so far. Good like with the writing.
After the first and 2nd chapters, i can see it got good feeling and future, waiting for more
Was already convinced this will be peak. I mean it's the author of Greed. After all who else but him can cook this masterpiece. Been completely hooked from chapter 1
Hello everyone, its the Author here! I just thought I'd drop some thoughts onmy own book.As you can see, I didn't rate it a full 5 stars. As much as I love my own work, I cannot deny that it isn't perfect, especially as my very first book.So far, we have yet to truly dive into the world of the story and while wecontinue that journey, I gladly welcome those who choose to follow. You're infor a lot of surprises.For any new person who comes across this, while the first few chapters mighthave a few errs, it gets better in every aspect. Trust me on that ?While you're at that, you can check out my newly released book. One I know isdefinitely better having learnt some valuable lessons from this one.You're free to ask questions tooTill later, from your sincere author— Passing_Byy
An unputdownable masterpiece! This book weaves a gripping tale filled with vivid characters and unexpected twists. The prose is elegant, the pacing flawless, and the emotions raw and real. It leaves you reflecting on its themes long after the last page. A must-read for anyone craving a story that entertains, inspires, and resonates deeply. Truly unforgettable ??✌?✌?
good plot, but there are so many things we dont get explained and he just randomly gets things from the system that we dont know of. and when there is a problem for the MC like build a car, and he just dose it even when he dosent have the necessary tools. and he says he dosent have superpowers yet he can teleport and delete memories (not superpowers but like it) but i like the plot so im gonna continue reading
I Greatly Enjoy reading this novel, I have read many novels of different genres, and only a few of them make me excited enough to wish for more chapters, although, at the time of writing this review, it has only been 104 chapters, the depth of the world and the character development has left me entranced, I wake up each morning looking forward to see how the story unfolds. *spoiler start* though Rumia has the cliqué holy fanatic vibe, to the point it borderlines on psycotic, shouting heretic at every chance he gets, I do hope he only represents part of the religion of the "Holy King
Okay so as of now I really like the story and the fact that I have no idea how it will turn out. The reason for this is that there are two sides of this story both being writen st the same time which makes it both a fun foa and read, but also a well thought out novel even if you don’t include the lewd portions in it.