A great start a good MC but I am at chapter 20 but I had to say something this novel is a story worth reading a following it has some unique elements you don't see often
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~It is good, just one simple problem author, we need pic of characters for visualisation of story and stuff 'cough' segs 'cough' ..........,~
Author why is the mc so timid? I really hate when others authors make their mc-s like this, mc in your novel had a tough life, so he should be able to man's up and don't act like a pu..y,bad novel bad novel bad novel etc.
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I haven't read a good VRMMORPG Novel in a while, so this has me hyped. It has a good storyline, and I hope for more action and reveal on the part of the Mc. It's not perfect, but it's still refreshing to read.
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its not worth your time .
the author sucks at describing the fights... it's even at the level where it's frustrating to read...in addition there are too many useless descriptions which already make the fight not so well described more difficult to read, and besides the author stops redefining the description of the technique as well as the weapons each time one of your characters makes a attack, and above all we already know that water represses fire, no need to give such a detailed and boring description in each paragraph...for me it's the worst novel I've seen in terms of combat description! just too frustrating!
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just how many clones are there of 179 or Ned and when will there real use of magic start?. He has pure magic then anyone in the world but can't use it. that kinda suck.