Why did the author switch from a novel about super natural people to This carbon copy of a xanxia novel where eastern martial arts trumph everything.A super cyborg uses bs buddah moves as his secret move.....Taiji is suddenly more important that thousands of thunderbolts from the freaking sky this story became boring overnight.
I love the book. Not just some run of the mill novel that has like 10 versions ghat are totally the same, no this is creative and very good to read. my only critic is that the author makes a flipping Cliffhanger every chapter... i mean just...
At chapter 64 and so far it is pretty good, interesting plot
So far the chapters are short but it's okay for a new author, just try to keep up witj frequent updates
Exciting Story and very Interesting theme of magic and science. Good good good follow up. now free to read, Good luck to your new novel author. Bye. bye.
I recommend trying this novel. It is well written with good grammer and no grammatical mistakes I can easily spot out.
The world background is described vividly and fits so well into the story. the Main Character can seem immature at times but considering his age it's 100% valid and not out of place. it's a slow progress in the main Characters growth but nothing to put anyone off in reading the novel. All side characters shows Character growth and are not there only to boost up the main characters image or strength. This shows the Author put serious work and thought into his novel.
This novels update stability is excellent easily earning a 5/5 from me. Each chapter released building on from the past and now having any plot holes even with the fast releases.
Like I said originally I recommend you give this novel a try as it takes a different approach to young master novels. The mc isn't weak or ridiculed at the beginning of the novel with him having to grow stronger to prove himself. It's more relaxing and enjoyable. one of the reasons I really enjoy reading this hidden gem
l love this story, especially the characters. keep writing author Nessy?
But l still wonder why you bear the same name with the female lead.
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Great start. So curious to know more. Also excited to know that what happened to that cruel mother. Cute Peach?
if you ignore how much time pass it is a good novel but it will become worse as the ch go she become an empire with barely 200 people and in 3 days it will become a city with kids women become pregnant in 1 day and give birth the day after XD XD XD 3 star for a good world background and a passable ch design and writing quality and stab of upp with a trash story dev
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One of those gets pulled into a different world by a system novels, but even though they are in a completely different world the nationalism/racism can't help but creep in. Your standard if you aren't Han Chinese you aren't good...even though it's a different world and the idea that this random people who look the same would actually be the same makes zero sense.