Hey y'all! A noobie author here. Hope you guys give the novel a try and any criticism would immensely help as I move forward. The pacing in the first few chaps is a bit slow but I will try to make the work as enjoyable as possible.Thank you for your time and Ill keep y'all posted, Byeeee
I normally don't go for werewolf based novels, but I decided to give this one a look, and I don't regret a thing! you guys should try it, it's so much different than some other copycat novels.
I've read quite a few rune stories and I quite like this one
Good. You deserve more popularity and readers. I will recommend your novel with my post?
This book is really good I just wish they would get rid of the sex stuff
hi dear readers, i am Arthur trams, i used to have a novel published in this app/sight. but mid way i had my due to an accident, i deleted my novel and i am reposting it now, i will post every chapter daily and it might take some time to complete some chapters -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------thank you, your dear authoranyways, i made some changes and they look as good as the old one
this is one of if not the best dragon novels I have ever read, great in depth story telling and the author goes into great detail to give a good picture as to what is happening at all times. I always look forward to the next chapter.
another mediocre story just like the 'My Vampire System' and I am sure it will be popular again coz that's the standard/bar for the readers of this platform.Had to drop this after reading some 30-40 chaps coz I just just couldn't get into the story. The quality that 99% of the novels here lack is 'Immersion' and that's the same for this novel too. Let's see of this review stands or will it be deleted to like the ones on MVS ! Delete it even if you want, I won't be bothered to give another review nor the story another chance.
Damn! That was fun! You should really update more often. Its not every day I get to enjoy a dark fantasy litrpg so much! Great work author. keep going!
TO BE BLUNT THE AUTHOR IS STEALING FROM HIS READERS. I'll admit this novel is pretty good but if your about to start this novel and updating stability is important to you, I suggest you don't . the author has a bad habit of disappearing a week before the end of the month and then posting like 2 chapters after the privilege has reset, it's happened so many times, i have a hard time believing it's not intentional. Also sometimes he disappears a week after the month starts without any explanation then comes back a few days before the month ends with 2 chapters and a sad story about why he disappeared. I understand that I might sound harsh but he has done this so many times that I'm starting to think that he's just trying to garner sympathy from his readers so they would buy the privilege again next month. Honestly this novel has what it takes to be ranked #1 but the author's deceptive habit is holding it back.
Very, very confusing plotline, many spelling mistakes in the chapters forcing you to re-read something thinking that you were just being stupid. The chapters jump from being a medieval society to refining oil in about 10 chapters and within the next few chapters having diggers and producing industrial piping and whatnot. The kingdom building aspect of this novel is alright and has some well-thought foundation building for a modern city.
although the first hundred or so chapters have quite a few dialogue and grammar issues, these are cleared up after that point. the story is decently compelling, with some minor confusion occasionally happening during certain sections. while it is a nice Yuri romance story, it is also a Harem yuri story, which is NOT denoted in the tags, I hope this is fixed in the near future. after the first, and partially including the second, the romantic interests seem forced and sloppy. shoehorned in a bit. power scaling ramps up faster than you can blink in certain sections, but this aspect can be kinda fun.all in all, if not for the sudden harem development, I'd follow this story to its conclusion.