The pace of the story is good. The main thing I like in this novel is her ability or system which is too overpowered and her good nature ?. Keep going like this ?, do your best? and entertain us?
Nice first chapter and great potential, added to library
Sorry to say this, but the story is a bit wierd, same with the main character, not in any world will he survive with his mouth.
Lovely beginning... Looking forward to more!
Keep writing, keep updating, and I'll keep reading. I love you
This a story where a select few gain special powers in the form of a simple system style progression. If you're looking for a story that the MC carefully plans and optimizes his powers then look else where. The world doesn't allow have any structured learning for awakeners until you're level 26 or rank 2(the ranking and level systems are very confusing.) Its basically a free-for-all and no hand holding when people awaken. The only information is asking random power users question or a restricted forum (basically trying to get all of your knowledge from reddit.) Opportunities are constantly missed from the get go. For example, the only way to dual class is getting a life seed before you awaken but they don't tell you until after you awaken. So besides all of that, the story is engaging and it does tell an interesting tale about an MC with imperfect and human traits powering through with an OP talent.
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It was an alright read. The story had some interesting parts, and the characters were decent. The pacing was fine and picked up as the revenge plot kicked in. I'm hoping for more kingdom-building elements in the future; personal strength is great, but I'd like to see more focus on his subordinates too
Definitely a must read novel.anyone should check this out.
la historia es muy hermosa me costo un entender pero valía la pena
It has a great world background ☺️, innovative and it's fun Though I wonder why the f is the MC a fuckin' edge lord and he kinda gives off NTR'd vibes and don't say it's about cultivation he could have gone to a brothel to cultivate there. Damn a hundred chapters and no real smut scene (no edging ).
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