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I wonder if anyone can tell me why this novel ends in chapter 502? she ended up incomplete? I find it difficult to arrive at an appropriate end in 130 more chapters ......
Website : qidian china Views : 7.12 million Rating : 8.7(2735) Chapters : 949 Status : completed Word count : 3.15 million author rank : platinum
This is very good , is a Novel with a true unlimited potential , and that I want to say is , First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page.Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an ideaThird: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)
The writing quality at the start is very janky but it improves a lot in the later chapters and the drama in this novel is SPICY. Really like it.Although the update schedule is bad and it's most likely because author works on 4 novels simultaneously. I have seen some authors do 2 novels at once but this author does FOUR!!
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An interesting take in the horror and thriller genre, this novel made me view the genre in a different light. I will be waiting for further updates! Also as another author I would like to suggest you to strongly convey the environment and internal thought process of the MC as well since a better link can be established with the reader-kuns! I will be supporting this novel and I have loved the current progress it has taken!
honestly i dont like kyle much but it doesnt focus on him too much which i do like also the plenty of perspectives is really cool pretty rare to see it so you get everyones perspective which i really like honestly i just hope this novel doesnt get abandoned like many others because its pretty good
I generally don't read novels of this genre but this is a good read. The chapters are detailed with proper descriptions. As author has clearly warned in the synopsis, yes, there was a huge dump of information but that's very important as it clears any doubt the readers might have. There were slight grammatical errors so I suggest you to proof read your story once.Congrats on the contract as well! WELL DESERVED!!! Keep writing!
la historia parece interesante en general se ve bien pero le hace faltan ciertos retoques:- la escritura no es muy fluida o cómoda para leer- en los inicios no hay un desarrollo logico, falta el cuestionamiento interno del mc acerca de porque fue elegido, incluso si la razon sea por aleatorio, me hace dudar si el mc es muy ingenuo o es estúpido?, luego no se explica muy bien porque termino en la secta, uno se hace una idea por la sinopsis pero no esta claro, ademas parece que el mc de la nada sabe artes marciales?, incluso si le dieron las tecnicas al ingresar hablando lógicamente un humano del mundo moderno no puede solo ver unas imágenes(no se explica cuando lo aprendio) y ya saber ejecutar los movimientos, eso solo es logico en los mundos marciales porque tienen una base y lo ven muy seguido- como se ve le mc?, después de un tiempo si lo mencionan un poco pero no hay una idea muy clara de su aparienciaya como algo personal su personalidad no es apta para el mundo del cultivo, pero supongo que eso mejorara con el desarrollo de la historia, se espera .esta es mi opinión para el autor, de pronto le sirva
First chapter, already died cuz of how good it iz. Maybe, if I completely read this, maybe the whole omniverse will explode. Lmao. Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Me giving myself some self advert. Don't mind me. I wonder when someone will come along to read this....... I tried to post. But it says 140 characters..... Ok then.Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah .It's been five minutes since I published...... I'm already regretting...... *sob* Anyways. Don't cry too much after reading this story, okay?
