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Julian shook his head. "My cousin got married last year and her child took his last name."
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Finally, not being able to bear up with the big grin on Butcher's face and the excitement that was welling inside him, Pulse asked him.
Naruto folded his arms and started grumbling.
Not an interesting storyA bit similar to monster musumeMC Hao Ren ( Hao = good, Ren = man/human) = goodman aka mr.nice guyWell not sure what to say, i just want to post my review right now
Nice cultivation background with fairly overpowered character. Like it was used be before. ???
Please proofread your chapters! In and On are not the same words and can't be used randomly. You also suddenly switched the name of a specific elf in the later chapters.Apart from that I love the story!
Honestly I wish there was more I would pay good money for definitely recommend
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I suggest you try to keep us (readers) updated as to the situation of how often and how much you will update this story.;,;.Positive Feedback: A well written original story (I've never seen it's like).;,;.Personal Feedback: I love what I've read so far, and hope to be able to read this story to completion (not to cliff).;,;.Score: SoU 3/5 Rest 5/5
I think i found my new number one am in love.................................................................................................................
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I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will
