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An intriguing book, am definitely looking forward to more instalment
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The reason I'm giving this a such low review is that everything is so simple and underdeveloped. The MC is op which is fine but the way you write him. He seems kinda single-sided. The storyline with Rumi needs to be developed more because even though they are soulmates they still need a more detailed love story. The writing quality is really simple, but it's your first fanfic so I can't blame you. I know that's it is hard to write them but just try to make the story feel real. The character design needs work to because Rumi seems like a simpleminded character.
When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
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Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
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Dialogs are dull, characters are one dimensional and i can't describe how much dumb mc is. He's literally walking through the fire and can't comprehend why the person in front of him is surprised. World background is okay, to some extent it's interesting. Overall i wouldn't recommend it unless author revise it
I started reading this novel maybe 3 to 4 yrs ago could even be 5. It was dropped numerous times and the current translation on another site is just unreasonably low quality, barely legible.This story is not your usual Xianxia. The author of this story isn't afraid to prematurely kill off characters you might like, the Mc is cautious but daring not willful but meticulous.The story has the random generated events that add spice to the story making it hard to predict the overall direction the story will go.I really enjoyed this story and got several hundred chapters in before I could not handle the TL quality. If you are interested in a dark story with slight hints of love interest along with beast companions and an Mc with a mysterious past he doesn't even know then this is the story for you.
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