If you like cliché "writing" this is for you. Otherwise stay away from it got anger isuess just from reading 15 chapters.
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What no!! It's one of the best endings ! Very satisfying!!
V8 C41, nuke? I'm guessing at least a bomb if it looks like a bullet.
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The MC is too much black hearted. Even though it's a simulation he doesn't even hesitate before wanting to kill his family in simulated world. A cold bastard this MC the story is good but the MC is bad.
I just don't get the hype. I don't have any issues with the grammar or the world setting as such.
My issues start with the lack of creativity. The mc just goes around killing and collecting skills without using them properly or thinking of how he can utilise them better. It's just more and more skills.
Second issue is with how he wants to solo but somehow he always ends up with someone else or a group and his secrets are laid bare and he ends up telling people about it. This happens despite the fact he knows his skills are broken.
Thirdly it's just a bunch of levels. I don't really see much of a story here at all. The guy just keeps going to Dungeons and easily gets levels.
I mean what's the point??? This novel has such nice covers but the story has been a real let down till now.
Good, keep it up and don't give up, writing can be very stressful trust me, but you could get better even better than some great novel writers of web novel.
Shameless Author rating his own novel...
What to expect from this novel?
1. A good System with a good attitude
2. An OP MC who crushes his opponents albeit with some difficulty
3. Good Fight Scenes
To be honest I was expecting this story to be so much better in the first few chapters but as I kept reading it kept getting worse worse and worse. First off is just how annoyingly nerfed the mc is and author just keeps trying to nerf him more and more, the author keeps on repeating certain issues with the mc which shouldnt even be there anymore. The worst part is the hugeeee amount of useless information dump EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER literally nothing I would read 10 chapters to only get a normal chapter’s worth of good information. I kept trying to give this story a try but as I reached almost chap 60 I just gave up and dont want to waste anymore of my time.
just so in love wow would recommend this book to anyone looking for love and drama ? ? ❤️