Esto es lo que no me gustó de esta lectuta:soft ntr, con esto me refiero a que una heroína es dejada en ropa interior y manoseada.El mismo protagonista observó todo el proceso para que según el, su chica se volviera más fuerte.Otro caso es el mencionado antes con una chica del capítulo 160~. La cual tuvo prácticamente de todo excepto penetracion con el antagonista. Amaneció desnuda junto a él y el protagonista lo orquesta todo.También tuvo relaciones con la mamá de una de sus chicas pero dijo que prefería a su marido y que no quería al protagonista. Es prácticamente un cuck auto infligido sin razón lógica más allá de que es si fetiche. También tiene un giro de guión donde tiene que abandonar un mundo y regresará 50 años después ya cuando las chicas estén muertas, de entre ellas las que mencioné antes.
Sigh, this is definitely a chinese novel, one in which if you turn off your logic, you will enjoy.Ungrateful mcThe system isn't really explained properly.Sentinel System, who is kinda tsundere...the personality of mc changes quite a lot.
he is strong compared to other players balancing that out is a problem yes but Goin the emotional route to nerf the nigg* now dat just doesn't sit well with me, I mean it's an open plot he cares they betray he snaps blah blah blah. anyway hope am wrong n will see in the future chapters. the premise of art is an explosion is way cool though bruv with all doz explosions he should av been out of mana more dan a couple of the fights but oh well semantics as they say
The characters are introduced and devolp in a terrible way. Every explination about his knowledge is basically “magic” and because hes rhe main character. Also the authors Syntax almost gave me an aneurism trying to read his story without speedreading to force my brain to autocorrect the grammer.
Shameless author here to tell you that this the best novel in all of WN ...except shadow slave and Lord of the mysteries ....i beat everyone else hands down ??
The story pace and plot is good. The concept of two best friends together in rebirth is new. The story is worth reading. Expecting more frequent chapter updates.
Author you literally killed it man you are a genius the story was already amazing when they were fighting the trolls and Goblins for survival.Then you showed ? another level of imagination and writing skills on the duhu mountains climbing I mean I can literally feel the horror they were going through as I was reading the chapters and I can confidentaly say you can be a horror novel writer ? i mean your story writing of the horrors they discovered in the duhu mountains so far is amazing author.And the most important thing is that the characters feel alive they are getting stronger through out the story not just damon every character has their own character build-up which i really liked about this story.Author so far the story is amazing so keep up the good work and please don't ever drop this novel this novel is really a master piece a 10/10.Thanks for the novel author and keep up the good work?.
"This the place Jieee?"
There no extra context to the mission and Axel only had a less than a minute left. He mentally prepared himself for the next game and stretched his muscles.
I sighed and looked around. This town was beautiful, the trees, the people, everything about it. I was tracing out the patterns on the leaves of the tree closest to me with my eyes. The science of patterns is such a wonder. There is a pattern in everything in nature. I immediately sit up. Yes, there is a pattern in everything. I try to work it out in my brain. I mind-link Adrian and include him in my thought process.
Attribute [Electro]
What does that processing power actually mean? All the implications