I dunno how should I say this...the concept of your story is really something new that I've read.I've read upto chapter 6 so far. The story is great...u've given a decent info about the world background and cultivation too in a sense I guess but it just seems kinda bland to me I don't know why! The mentality of MC seems kinda weird to me (in my opinion atleast) one moment he is feeling betrayed and tries to deny the whole thing and in the next he is determined to be the best all of a sudden, and it's not bad but it did feel strange.All in all its a good story with potential I think, u have good chapter length and great grammar. So keep up the good work man. Cheers!
Was a good read, looking forward for more chapters!And the names were uniqueHope i can also have the same naming sense like yours lol.Also, I hope you can give my novel a review too.Good luck on your novel!