Very strong start and beautiful eloquence. I think I might be hooked
Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling ?? I enjoyed curling up with a coffee ☕️ and enjoying your novel as the characters developed and the plot thickened. I am loving your novel and can hardly wait to see what will happen … I look forward to it being offered again ???⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️??
this is stolen from kurokitsune on fanfiction.net
Well, this is the first ever novel to give put real-life details of the words and matters that are not normal talk about like this here.
HOLY SHIT!! THIS IS BEING TRANSLATED THIS NOVEL IS SO GOOD!! IT'S ALREADY COMPLETED IN RAW................ ..........
So far up until chapter 70+ while he is starting in the academy the story seems interesting. The concept is quite good yet I have a few concerns.The fact that this was reincarnation after being regarded as a "Grandmaster scholar" of some sort you would think that he should have the knowledge needed to exceed every one. The fact that he became like that before reincarnation should entail that he should have at least the ability to increase his white core among other things. Frankly, his having the knowledge of the past even as a "Grandmaster scholar" shows no particular big advantage to him and to the story. With his knowledge of the past he should have exceeded every kid in the academy but it was basically not the case in the story. I see no point of him being that "grandmaster scholar" in his previous life since the story would be no different if he was a simple scholar. Another one is the pattern of the story. To be honest, it was quite predictable. Its full of a sort of down path (the challenges for the MC) when in a good story it goes like rise before going down. In here, he basically experience continous challenges that seems too annoying since the world doesnt work that way no matter how fictional it may be there will always be a "good or awesome even or encounter" so to speak.
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I must say that I loved your story, I give it a 100 out of 100 but I wanted to ask you something, I don't know if you will read this but I could upload your story to my Youtube channel and of course I will give you the credits because it is your story and I will say follow you can I upload it or not? the story I want to upload is Bringing the elements of the game into the real world.
That's me. Well honestly I don't have much memory about the recent events of
Jester gave the bottle with surprises face.
"Why is that the answer Mat?" asked me.
Akupun masuk kedalam rumah dan merebahkan badanku di kasurku yang empuk ini dan tidak terasa kegelapan merayapiku.