The novel is very good, the concept is nice, the plot development is mostly logical and interesting, even the character development is relatively good (something xianxia are notorious for being bad at), the main draw of the story, world building and kingdom building are some of the best I have seen among web novels. Alas, it has a glaring major flaw, one I tried many times to overlook but failed to, because it destroys the main draw of the novel. To put it simply, the author loves retconning, he retconned the story so many times that I've completely lost trust in his ability as a writer. These retcons are primarily aimed against the protagonist, basically he gives the MC a power-up, then realizes that he became too strong for the current arc, so he retcons the story by either nerfing MC directly by making his cultivation techniques suddenly not work (he did this for soul refining, the MC is in a situation of endless resources but he's not advancing by an inch; and for body refining by first giving him a strong cultivation technique then just ignoring it) or indirectly by making his peers stronger than previously stated.
A book that might be a bit wonky sometimes, but I will try my level best to improve as it goes on. Hopefully, I will be able to give you something that is worth reading by the end of it.
Since there has been no update in a week, this might have been dropped. This socks because I spent coins on supporting this and now it seems like a waste.
This is actually a really good story so far >~< when I started it last night, I genuinely didn't think much of it, due to the grammatical errors and such, as well as the fact that the other 2 webnovels I've read were both really well known with few errors and stuff. But, I find this one just as interesting and in-depth ^-^ 10/10 would recommend
Overall Ive only read like 20 chapters and will definitely continue reading this story. Minor grammatical mistakes but none bad enough where you dont know what the author is saying. HUGE harem story Filled with humor and action. Also author i think it would be smart if you were to make an auxiliary chapter thats just a list of all the mc wifes with their name, race, and power, because i keep getting people mixed up lol.
PLEASE PICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To be honest I wasn't supposed to read this because of the lack of chapters and the title, here I thought it would be like those Xianxia sh*ts but then I accidentally tapped this novel by accident since I'm using a mobile, thus since I was bored and nothing to read then I continued reading this...at first this novel Entrance was serious.almost the same as Overlord (Anime) but there are just similarities but when I continued to read till Chapter 3 I got hooked this kind of novel is a gem!glad I accidentally tapped this novel or else it would be left unread in my Library since I've already booked marked it even without reading it.
I loved the store the loss the discovery the amazing will of the character and his friends the complete and unstoppable love of the character
Haha, I tried to give myself what I think to be a fair score. I just want to warn you guys, if you see this, that there's this irritating guy going around hating on a bunch of author's books because he doesn't like them. If you see one of his reviews here, you'll know who he is; just please read for yourself and form your opinion. As my lovely, intelligent readers, I'd ask you not to be dragged down by people who try to infect and stop people enjoying things they like.