I think it’s a great book that need little to no major corrections but maybe introducing a new side-character that has some unique connection to Master Magi. One minor thing that I think you could add is his Dragon Horned Rhino evolves into a ‘purer’ form of a dragon and gains some special ability only for earth dragons. The last thing you should keep doing is adding the snotty rich kid type that get always seems to get whooped in the end. Its been great reading this book and I hope you add a second part.
Thank you for this wonderful story, I really love this story it's captivating and I love the thrilling and suspense in it as well as the adventure I can't wait to the next update.
Good story! Coincidentally I have a character named Kaelin in my story too lol. Keep writing and developing your story, its in a good start.
Unironically the most realistic novel.But seriously, this is a real big brain 10000 iq move. Teach me how to become as M A S S I V E B R A I N E D as you m8.
Rate 5 STARS if you got huge boobs. i mean some serious honkers. a real set of badonkers. packin some dobonhonkeros. massive dohoonkabhankoloos. big ol' tonhongerekoogers. what happens next?! big bonkhonagahoogs. humongous hungolomghononoloughongous.
The story plot is good and characters design as well but but the way you write the convo and the person who converse made me confused maybe because its different form from what i have usually read. But this is only my opinion and so far its quite interesting. More power to you and write more?
With 4 chapters, I couldnt wait to read the next updates. The plot is intriguing as to how the subtle hints will play out in the story. The question lingers, will he walk on the same path as his father or not? Read if you want something different.
This is my first review..... good story line, not sure if it was terrible translation or terrible writing but it made it that much harder to read.
Curse you author my heart hiccuped due to you! And that alt ending why!!!! Aughhhh Any one planning to read the comme ts to see how the short novel is guys its worth reading yeah it isnt too long but its good and gives you laughs and feels and theres angst and love its a good novel so enjoy it
Well.... it still follows the typical beasttaming setup/transmigration plot.. nothing original there. But if you're a fan of Pokemon... it is still a genre for you.Onr minus for me on this one is the lack of description of the beast... the naming sense of the author does not help either in helping the reader to visualize the beast.
It's the story uniqueness for me.. and there is nothing more good than reading a story that leaves an impressionSo far I've been stuck and there is nothing more I want to say that! UPLOAD A NEW CHAPTER...
This novel apparently will be promising. I read until chapter 40 and I didn't had any issue, althought I can't understand about translation quality (because my English is not the better) all the others parts seems good. The start isn't a cliche and the characters are not bad. if something very bad doesn't happen in the course of history, this will probably be a good novel