The Life Of Vilkas

Overall, the story is great and I see a lot of potential for this story. I may not be an author but the way you pieced together the outside world with the protagonist gave a vibe of a vigilante to Kurt. The grammar also wasn't bad, and the introduction of Kurt being lower than an average person but rising to power through memories of an immortal cultivator that was identical to him was fascinating. In conclusion, the story is great and I look forward to reading your novels.

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It is really nice that this MC doesn't have plot armour, is extremely evil because he chooses to abandon his humanity and at the end of the story we see him evolve from a mortal to a real god

The story plot is good and characters design as well but but the way you write the convo and the person who converse made me confused maybe because its different form from what i have usually read. But this is only my opinion and so far its quite interesting. More power to you and write more?

wooo nice history, i need more chapterss good job!!!its kind of weird history but its great, i hope to see the family in cosmic order........

It's a well-written novel with a lot of thought put into each chapters. The world setting was laid out perfectly. The only thing that's not sitting with me in my opinion is how the MC behaved. I like it when he started to get confident with himself after getting a power boost. Also his personal background was nicely explained. The aspect of growing and sympathizing with the character grows with us readers, however once he developed this new power, he rather becomes impulsive with his decisions and personality fluctuates a lot which left me frowning at times. I have enjoyed reading this novel otherwise and goodluck to future readers ?