The best hook I ever read. At first it confuse me, but now I understand that the first paragraph is the flashback. I really want to know the MC as a character and the world.... Oh my god, the most expansive worldbuilding I have ever seen and I only get a glimpse of 10 chapters.
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i love this story very much ❤❤❤............ can't wait for more chapters .................❤☺ keep up the good work ?❤❤❤❤❤❤????
This is a novel that's actually deserving of its high score. Its got a bit of everything for everyone. If you're into stats and following the numbers the early chapters are a stat junkies wet dream. And yes there's a few mistakes here and there that's quickly cleared up unlike a lot of authors who are 900 chapters in and still screwing up their numbers. Also the big bonus is how very responsive the author is to commentary and that's a big plus for me. If you're just a casual like me who considers the character stats in passing and can make it through the early chapters, like seriously there's a lot of stats early on? I'm sure there is enough of a great quality story that you'll enjoy or my assumption is that the author left enough of a tease in each chapter that kept me thinking what's happening next. Unfortunately I've reached the current updated chapter 67 and I'm having WTF-ism issues thinking can't I just have the next chapter now? Anyway I really like this novel
The synopsis feels like it is creating hype. The MC is more like a Naruto who doesn't seem to have any kind of negative emotion (even towards enemies who have literally tortured him). It kind of creates a misalignment between the MC's past and the rest of the story. Would have been better if it was one or the other - a lighter past or a darker protagonist. Still great work on the writing quality. Grammar is good enough and it's a fun read if you are willing to skip through a few chapters that feel a lot more like fillers.
This is just another trash novel. It's one of those stories written by authors who want to make quick cash. There is a lack of common sense, quick tempered MC , dimwits of other characters among other other features of trash novels. Plus it has one thing I truely hate,a combination of technology in martial world.
The MC don't act like a 89 years old man who has experience playing VR like. his stats are infinite and saying that he needs to grow the heck??
I think i could absolutely enjoy your story but the grammar is really bad. I am sorry that i am saying it this direct, but maybe you have a friend or someone you know who can help. Otherwise try to find someone online who would help you and continue writing!
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Great action without own original idea! That’s rare nowadays. I like this and I look forward to the next release please keep this up it’s too good to be true.(^з^)-☆
Not bad I like the story and the characters, I love light novels about death, powerful main character and mainly where the main character turns in to a female, "gender bender"looking forward to the next chapter,