Does the hero have any supernatural abilities or system? Please reply back so I can start reading it
|| This review will only be limited to volume 1 as I will wait for volume 2 to continue reading.|| Writing Quality [ 4 stars ]: It's good, but there are still a decent amount of grammar errors.|| Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: The release rate is from 2 chapters/day to 1 chapter/2 days. It's quite unstable to be honest.|| Story Development [ 5 stars ]: The story is interesting as of volume 1, the author did a great job at building the foundation for the main plot. Ellena's development is still too fast in my opinion as personality isn't something easy to fix, considering her past. Overall, the character development is not the best, but I've seen way worse. || Character Design [ 5 stars ]: It is good, but you can add a little extra detail ( like the point that is unique to that character ) to improve both the word count and sense of immersion in the story. || World Background [ 5 stars ]: Since I've just read volume 1, the world building only centered around 2 towns but it will improve later as this is still the early stages of the story. The world was built brilliantly by the author and the power of 'Ellena' actually went well along with the story|| Extra opinion: You should absolutely try this story out. I'm sure it will not disappoint you. As for me, I have weak resistance against cliffhangers so I will read after every volume is completed. Total score: 4.6
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i read 20 chaptersi don't know the cultivation system and i know nothing about the world exept it has at least 9 mountains where the sect is nothing more.translation is rather bad. example he finished foundation realm over night but it says he joined the sect over night as chapter titleupdate stability: hard to rate because only trial readcharacter design: don't really know anything about the charakters except mc has a login system where he get things every day and he doesn't want to do anything except sitting in his cave and cultivate. no backround info no real emotions no ambitions.every fight is someone tries to attack him and he attacks back 1 time with his fist, booooom enemy deadall in all its a bland story
Chap 34 so far truly an interesting read so far, I like the plot so far with the three and the way the author used such an overlooked point to put them on different paths.
There is no hate, only joy
For you are beloved by the goddess
Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds
Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul
Pride is lost
Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them, but when the world needed him most, he vanished. Luckily— What Lucky?! Go and read the story first before I continue!!!
?????????????????? Ooh my!!! This is a refreshing take on the system and cultivation theme of fanfiction and I truly enjoyed what you have done with your take on it. I just started this book ? today and I have not stop ? reading it yet! Keep up the good ? work! I look forward to what you do next.
went from a good quality first chapter, to some trashy raw MTL by the second chapter
Good luck , keep it up with the good work nana , always a pleasure to read another story of yours , still you need to focuse on some writing improvements , overall , all good :3
This book is a very interesting read. It takes a lot of skills from other things and it changes to interact with his world. It has to be one of the top of the 5 new trial reads.
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