I really like this novel!, I have to say keep it up author.
Interesting. The world is starting to get it. not every story will be completely unique. Instead, the characters' relationship with the world around them makes it compelling. Excellent work.
i don't make reviews usually unless i really like the work. i will list the things i personally like in this story. the writing quality is excellent it made me immersed in the story. The grammatical errors are so minute that it might be non existent. the story development: it's intriguing it makes you want to read more chapters that you lose track of time The MC: you probably saw his japanese name and harem tag and thought " another beta harem protagonist that is as dense as rock and too scared to even make a move on any girl " and trust me you could never be more wrong The MC is Cold , intelligent, Not a simp, not a whinning brat. he will adapt to different situations without complain, has mysterious past that makes you want to know more about and how his past shaped him to be what he is now. he has restrain .doesn't think with his dick but that doesn't mean he will shy away if he is provoked enough. he is not perfect however but that's part of the character development i noticed that the characters have depth in them every character is unique. and the conversations is done well.this is just my opinion, and like i said i don't make reviews so iam kinda inexperienced . i hope this was helpful to anyone who would want to give it a try.
The story to what I've read, chapter 14, has been very enjoyable and interesting. Though my annoyance is that I met it at 18 chapters, I really want more chapters ???This story is worth 5 stars and I see this novel going big if the author doesn't drop it
This is your story so, knowing you im goona love it welcome back btw!!
Rewiew after 62 chaptersSo far it has great Potential.Starting may be not great but after tower it got good.There are some situations at start where they are ridiculous and forced, but the story got a lot better and MC finally started using situations for his advancement.Naming of powers/Techniques during latest arc are quite good and uniqueSo 5* review based on improvement in writing and quality, keep it up author
Love this book. at starting it's look kinda boring but after reading next chapter it was really good and hold good suspense and Mystery
Before anyone reads this novel, the character will always be referred to as "upbeat" young man. It's kinda comical at the beginning because he's in terrible situations and still referred to as "upbeat" but by the 10th chapter it's just unbearable. There's quite a few grammar and spelling errors, but that's quite common on here. The story really doesn't flow well and there's no depth to the MC at all. He doesn't question anything and makes dumb decisions.
Sorry in adavance cause am reviewing for FP
a very promising start, it hooked me from the very first chapter, concept is very good, I like the flow of conversation between characters, 10/10
This is well-written, it's only a matter of time before this became well-known. I'll be supporting this! Keep it up man!
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.