based on the free chapters I read it it is a good novel
The story has a good start. A concise plot.
very excited for this novel! So far it has been a very interesting start.
Can you update it quickly!!!!
absolutely fantastic i loved it....will read the rest when its out!
This will be my first review ever but overall this book has amazing potential. Since I’m coming over from the authors fan fiction i already know that he has the capability and tenacity to makr this story shine and not drop it. Only wish he would give a little more detail to the characters so we can have a easier time picturing what they look like. Highly recommend giving this book a chance!
My book.I'm not screaming right now!. ? My book has a whole lot if reads. I hope you enjoy it, kindly leave your comments and support authors by unlocking chapters. Thank you ? ? ? You're the G.O.A. readers
Here we Go Go Go...!!!...!!!...!!!...!!!
Author here. There are areas that could use refinement, particularly in pacing. I welcome any questions you have about the story and i hope you enjoy the read!
one strong aspect of this novel would be character development people aren't just mindless things depending on mc another word the world isn't built just for the mc . people act as how we expect from their characterfeelings are shown strongly the important subject of romance doesn't just happen on first sight and trust doesn't form immediately so this aspect makes the novel reasonableone thing that I have complains about would be the difference between stages of cultivation cause other than getting a bit stronger we don't see any thing , it would have been better if the author had put some work in there for example : in whitch realm could they fly or minor things like a change in color of their core or manifestation of some spirit etc
This is heading with a good start. Can't wait to see what else unfolds
show. First chapter is certainly eye catching . Ethan must have thought he was dreaming ??