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surprisingly not the worst thing I've read,still, I got to chapter 30 then realised I was lost, I have no idea what's happening or why or even how he's getting stronger, so I just quit
It's like I wanna keep reading since the world that this story is taking place in is interesting and it's got me hyped up but man the grammar is kinda killing it for me. But that's about it, excluding the grammar and overall it's a pretty good story so far from what I've gotten to read.
Shameless Author here rating it 5 stars~~ALSO TO GRAB YOUR ATTENTION AND READ THIS:This is an interactive novel based on my original book World Gate Online in the past. Interactive meaning you, as the reader, get to choose the path our MC will take!At the end of the chapter is a list of choices. All you need to do is to do a PARAGRAPH COMMENT on your choice which I will count. Only 1 account can vote for 1 choice. If I see 1 account vote on 2 different choices, all his votes are not counted.By the time I write the next chapter, I will start counting and write the verdict on the next chapter.Also, this novel is up in Scribblehub which has a poll function so I'm going to add the two sites' total count for the choice. Feel free to also vote in SH...not like I can stop it...*If it gets too hard to count votes here, I'm gonna stop posting on this site and just focus on SH XD
This book is awesome and the pacing is great. I wrote a review when it was still in its infancy and I just knew this book will be awesome....I'm gonna be one of those who can brag when this book becomes one of the best ?Great work author!!
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This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock!I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!