Hope this gets picked! Super interesting so far, if anyone finds the raws please comment below
The first 15 or so chapters, the Oc Mc is bullied, harassed, and forced by his system into imbraising and possibly traumatizing situations lied to in order to trick him into buying useless things to further bully him with. If you like having the Mc suffer just to suffer, then you will like this story. If you're like me and don't like those kinds of stories, then don't read this one.
I really like where the story is going so far, and hope the author doesn't ever drop!Wordfillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
honestly I have to drop, the mc is just an extremely naive and frustrating character he genuinely made me feel like ripping my hair out
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2/Chap or 4/Chap for Day
Its wily gooood.
Its very hard to find a good non-human webnovel with smart MC...Thank you author...9/10....................................................
Writing Quality⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐I tried really hard to like this story.My biggest problem with the story is that it feels like its going nowhere.I feel like MC has no goal like noting to go for there also seems to be no enemy. So we just wave along with whatever is going on.I read like 270 chapters in 2 days and i can sum up what happens in a few lines.I feel like there is no substance in this story. MC just does stuff that's about it.We barley see MC fight we have noting to root for i think there are like 15 fighting chapters maybe less where MC is fighting. And when a fight happens MC is NEVER there. He is always comprehending some ****ty law or cultivation or whatever.So we get like 6-7 chapters of forgotten characters that fight and get like 1-2 where MC does something. MC also vanishes from the story for like 5+ chapters and we are like why do we need this info again?There are also some really stupid stuff going on like:- MC fell 5 minute's straight and had no injury what so ever (he was like just starting to cultivate to)Then he uses all his qi to fly up and he could not go more then 50m and fell down again.But 2 days later he can fly all the way up (like 300km) I think he was 8 grade mortal to like 5 grade second thingySo you are telling me he has 600 times more Qi now then he had b4?(also does not take him long to get to the top)-MC is flying up a mountain 15000feed (less then 5km) but it takes him 5h so you are saying me he is flying 5x slower then the average human walks?Then the next time he is flying super fast again its all over the place.He could fly 300km up a pit but he can't fly for a few km again next time cuz his Qi was out when he has allot more Qi now.-And don't get me started on the trails / dreams / ... we get like chapters upon chapters of random filler character fighting we never see again.-And After his first trail they said he will need to do another one at 20% of his bloodline yet now it looks like he will need to do it at 5% for no reason whatsoever.-... ...Then lets talk about MC.- He is fairly stupid makes retarded mistakes (obv stuff)- Should act evil when he acts more normal barley kills anyone - Cultivates like a hard demon cultivation thingy when all it accomplishes is to restrict mc do do certain stuff.-Also i was hoping for there to be some romance but MC is a blockheadAlso don't get me started on MC secrecy. Hides his cultivation from his family for 270 chapters when all they do is worrie for him. Like they are not bad people like you might think they will backstab him or whatever.Even if its only to his grandpa & mother but NOOO he can't tell them shit . They took care of him when he was a retard for 6 years then again when he was training (aka not moving) for another 3/4 years. Yet he can't tell them he is strong and moving all over the place they still think he is a weak shit.We also know noting abut the world. Like all i can say you is eummm i think there are more continents.oo Yea and the last one, there is so much F I L L E RIdk there is so much more that pisses me off but ill stop here.
Comment by PASSIVESPAMMER Here we go again another pussy beta male mc who wants to hide behind the scenes.90% of novels follow this smae boring plot dropping this hot garbage and dropping novels on a whole. Evey book i read mc has to hide his identity why is it a trend? It's fing cliche.
As a little payback, I decided to leave this review for you. To show support to the author.------------------------------------------------
So... I read the first Volume and i most likely won't read more of the story. Wich is sad because I like the style of story's and am a big fan of crafting focused story's. There are a few reasons for me dropping this story. First is the lack of world background, stuff just happens, that's it, no real Infos why or how. Most of this events get 1 paragraph at most hinting to it but still no real reason is given for most. Some would say it's a mystery but the amount of this happenings is so big that even after a full volume i basically don't know more then in the first 10 ch. The interaction of the MC and the other Characters in the world is forced, again no real reason is given ( hey you are in the same guild as me!!, i only know you for a few days but how about i tell you one of my greatest secrets!)The story also has a bit of a flow problem at least in the first Volume where I'm not even shure anymore if it's Slow or fast paced because the Stats and Boni don't make any sense compared to Enemy's and Powerlevel.Quality wise the story is ok, the basic Characters are a bit one dimensional but it's only the first Volume that I have read so maybe the Autor is going for a slow Development. The Plot Armor is thick for the MC, like really thick. Objectively i would rate the story at about 3/5It's not bad, but from what I have read it not really fleshed out. The first Volume reads like a draft paper, with stuff that should happen, but the way is not yet written. So 3/5 because it has massiv Potential but just isn't really there yet.Now to my Personal reason for dropping it. I found it boring, i wanted to drop the story after ch. 27 but I forced myself to at least finish a Volume and give it a Chance. But yeah in the end I was bored. The story is like I said basically a draft paper, nearly no personal development of the characters. I'm not shure what the Story what's to be, Op MC story? , Crafting Master story, Game Level Story? , Skill steal story? , A Story about Personal growth? Kingdom / Guild Building?Because up until the end of the first Volume it's nothing of those, the potential is there, but it's all rather raw and unfinished.But Like is said that doesn't mean the story is bad, just that I didn't like it that much, and I'm maybe overly Critical but I believe constructive Criticism is important if one want to grow.I am trying to write a story myself, but it's just a draft write now and I think I scraped about 10 drafts already because not the Criticism of my friends and myself. So if the Autor reads this, i don't want to put you down or something , the chapter Count tells me that you put massiv amounts of effort into this story. It's just my opinion, i hope you keep going and get better each an every Chapter you write. I personally want to advise others to give the story a try tho. Just because it's not my cup of Tea doesn't mean others won't like it, give it a try.
The mc and other characters show familial emotions way too soon, as in, like, Romeo and Juliet to soon. I just met you the day before yesterday, we know nothing about each other, but let's treat each other like blood siblings... that type of concern doesn't just appear out of nowhere...