I have a problem with this novel. There isn't just enough chapters, I practically read everything here in one go. so please more of this novel. I can't think of having too much of this novel from what I have read so far
Did you read it? My quess is no.
my brother
Does anyone know if MC ends up with his shidi (Ming Suwen)?
Hiatus or dropped?
Please someone should recommend a good story or stories for me I have exhausted my library... Thanks in Advance
Kai always makes big plans for Gary, we don’t know why, is he his little pet project? But never is open about it, leaving him uninformed. A pattern repeated endlessly.Then complains that Gary is an idiot. Maybe you could pass the infos? Kai as in “not okay”.
great novel. ending was alright but i would have liked for something like an epilogue chapter which described the rest of his life. all in all a good read. 8/10 would recommend
If only it was updated frequently it would be the best novel by far
Good story. The main character a bit wishy washy. But I believe in character development. Hopefully he can become strong as soon as possible! Many typo. But its okay!!
Great story so far. I really like Shade's character, his qualities are unique to say the least. His suspicion towards people might actually be a good thing in this survival game. Can't wait to see what happens inside his mind as he goes on playing for his life.The writing quality well... I didn't expect such clean pages from a writer here in this site. There are some paragraphs where active voice could be used to reduce the word redundancy, but that's just me nitpicking. The reader can expect a smooth read without being interrupted by errors.Story is unfolding through a third point of view. I have no complaints about the pacing of the book as well. I can't really say anything about the world building yet but this novel has the potential to keep a reader hooked. The author has smartly used the trending elements here (death game, unsocial mc, game world, etc). However, I believe the author will make a difference which hundreds of other writers fail at doing.
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