Review after 1st part of 2nd game endedNOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time!The good:- Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic.- Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!!- 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role.- Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good:- Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective.- At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed.- With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters.One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.
this is peak author just don't drop it you know
pls .... just pls don't drop this book. It's actually quite good
wow, the story is starting to get intense, I'm loving this novel, it's amazing, fast paced, good character development?, it is everything I love.❤️ good job Author you're amazing ?
Five Star review here, and this isn't me being shameless. I've written quite a few books, but none are like this one. You'll understand once you've read the first few chapters. The story gets many surprising twists and turns, and it isn't your usual Overpowered Mc novel. Trust me on this, this story is definitely worth your time.
Why tf is this rated high and have so many views?It has Chinese novel elements like scummy tactics from administration while being based in the US ...
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This is a hidden gem especially if you like darker novels, the mc is somewhat op but he still runs into problems a lot. I like how the author handled him existing for so long by making him just box everything away. His morals are non existent after spending so long in torturous pain but I would like there to be moments where he questions what he’ s, maybe if he commits mass murder for little to no reason. My suggestion for the author to increase readers is to change the synopsis, its really long and to be honest I only read through like half or less, it doesn’t tell you what the story is about at all. If you wish to keep the poems In it I would suggest putting them beneath a reagular synopsis, when I first saw this novel I was going to not read it because of the synopsis but I’m I gave it a chance.
They interrogated us, examined us as they want. Who the hell think they are?
Is this dropped already? Only one chapter?
even someone with bad luck like u can make a living with this." said Aaron with a smile as wide as the sun
"Now he's dead," I said after a moment. "You were his closest friend, so I know you'll want to come to his funeral this afternoon."