Hydro: Bite

The writing style of the author at the beginning of the story had a nick and pick at places. But the later chaps show that the author has improved his writing style. It is really difficult to follow the schedule and keep up with stable updates. So it is commendable.I like how it was not only abt coming back for his wife but also for his daughter. The daughter's character makes the novel a bit more fluffy.CRITICISM- There are some paras that are loaded with information that makes you wanna skip it(at the beginning of the novel). But it ends up being some useful info which I feel like I later missed. So don't put too much info when a character is introduced-since there are people who try out the novel without having an ounce of knowledge on cultivation. They may feel difficulty in reading it.Except for this, I think it is a great story.

Evetything is just so bland just one cliche after another.  Story doesnt even go anywhere and author loses track of how long thing are.   Characters are flat and uninteresting.

Dear author,                     I so wanna start reading the book, however, that 'taking a break' bugs me so annoyingly. I don't wanna be left on cliffhangers, so please start UPDATING it ASAP!!!thankin' you.

This book got me hooked, from a good plot to accuracy of words and interesting characters which are amazing. Good job to the author.........

I rarely give compliments, keep the up the good work, you are doing a great job, It's a very good story, someday it might have its own franchise.Now off to sleep, Snore zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I really like the concept of the story. The novel is interesting and intriguing with the character portrayal which is well designed with interlinking relationships making it humorous and creative. Characters are sketched out finely tallying to the requirement of the plot. I like reading from every genre and particularly fond of romance not overly excessive but a little bit is okay, your story even though didn't have those but still is very much likeable. Some typos popping here and there needs to be kept on check.