Amazing story, lots of good interactions between the mc and the side characters. Everything generally seems like its fits within the story. However the biggest issue with this story has to be the alters as they came out of nowhere and they honestly take away more from the story than they add. Honestly if they just suddenly disappeared in any of the chapters than I’d be happier.
Bro does a good job writing this novel. A Masterpiece in the making?
The author did great, I'm really impressed, a day never went by without me reading a chapter, please keep updating I'm following
One of the few novel I like along with Apocalypse «Doom Cockroach», Doomsday Pillars, Global Evolution & World’s Apocalypse Online in the same genre. Please support this novel people, I would hate to see this one dropped :/
This isn’t a bad story by any means. For me, the biggest gripe is the constant POV changes. I understand the author is using them for world-building and plot development, but because they happen so frequently—and often with characters who are nowhere near each other—it feels like you’re trying to read five different stories at once. There are definitely other issues with the book (as many reviewers have pointed out), but none are as frustrating as the relentless shifts in perspective.
Okay, it's time for school. I get up from my bed with happly.
In the hallway i see a man sitting on living room and he smiled at me.
I arrived at my house.
Okay, I eat my food right away. "Hmmmm."
Their was no words to describe how I felt Like I could survive a nuclear blast I felt as If I could go 12 rounds with mike tyson and beat him without barely even trying.
Blinking, the assassin asked, "What about him?"
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