Chapter 4 left me on a cliffhanger. Its the kind that I don't like the feeling but its the kind that brings me back to the story and look forward to the updates. I just got a bit confused that the zombies were still referred to as people or person so I had difficulties determining if it was a zombie or a human being. All in all its a great read, I still feel like its too short or maybe I was just too into it that it felt short for me (*≧︶≦))(￣▽￣* )ゞ
cover art is good........................................................................................................... that's about it
The Mc is extremely dumb again and again
dangerous fight somewhere... he must go there to die
something is strange with his body .... he doesnt care
and such
Around chp 127. Honestly it started really well and I liked the family stuff, the emotions seem real and thoughtful and the chapters are interesting..... however this takes a major nose-dive in the second volume.it just becomes sooo boring and monotonous, lith literally does nothing for the majority of the time and anything mildly interesting happens to other characters but you dont really care or have any emotional attachment to these people as most are just character traits embodied fully and silly. I understand it's a slice of life and that's fine, but it's a boring slice of life, it's literally saying the actions hes going through beat for beat and that too would be fine but he doesnt ever really do anything interesting it's just going to class, drinking tea and sleeping. even during the capture the flag nothing particularly noteworthy happened. the only characters he interacts with in the academy are his 2 male roommates and flamboyant teacher with no redeemable values who apparently is gonna be apart of the harem (bleghh). oh and another thing is this is a harem slice of life novel during an academy arc and not one female student has been introduced, no shenanigans, nobody that provides some interactions, be it flirting or whatnot, for the mc. yaya I get it your trying 'different' and not have all female characters falling over the mc drooling but to reduce that number to 0 just makes it boring when your trying to be different and 'mature', theres a reason people flock to things like that. all in all good start but dropped off considerably, part of me wants to keep reading to see if it gets good again but I just dont care about reading from so many other ppls perspective when the mc is relegated to being boring and mature with nothing note worthy to do
I love your work, never stop writing . can't wait for more
writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake ? honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out.story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself.characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way offI could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review ?
Above-average idea, below-average writing. Lots of potential, but the writer clearly needs a ton more practice before being able to pull of what he wants; as it is, the style is inconsistent, sentences are often repetitive, and the descriptions, details, world-building and so forth are done in an odd, jarring manner. The only reason the WQ gets 2 stars is because I've seen far worse on this site.Great idea, though.
It starts with a bang literally. I've never read a serialized fiction detective novel before and this is looking to be great! I'm already sucked in and a lot of chapters ahead!
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
the best novel on here.really well written, long chapters and the chapter releases are all ways on time.the story is amazing with really good character development.would recommend this to anyone.
All that i saw nice in this novel was the different cultivation system, the rest being cliche and everything other xianxia generic type novels offer. What I see as a shame is that this novel has more fans then The Cell Prison that is something different in the good sense because after a while you get bored of generic bull*hit. Sometimes I question the reading taste of people...don t you get bored of the same type of novel with no innovation, again and again?