I like this a lot but I cant read more because you are not uploading more chapters. So please request you to update more chapter's so I can read more
A very basic story in every sense. There is nothing outstandingly bad but nothing stands out as really good either. it lacks depth(no character building or world building) and progresses from one cliche to the next. After 20 chapters, nothing really interested me enough to continue. Overall, above average for this site but lacked enough appeal for me to continue.
Where the f*** are the chapters? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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