DadangMohammed
Synopsis states MC name is Ryan, then it is Lin Lie, then linley. That and the start just seems all over the place.,..........................
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this novel is a mess, not a masterpiece. it's a chaotic mess surrounding the guy who is supposed to be the secret killer. that's all I'll say in this review.
So good please don’t drop ????So good please don’t drop ????So good please don’t drop ????So good please don’t drop ????So good please don’t drop ????
A gender bender Disguised - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
This is really well written, and it looks like most of it is Original. Author is really showing his ambition and talent here. And it shows with the quality of the writing.
does the writing improve at all later on and stop feeling so rushed and all over the place? asking because it would be a shame to give up on a book with such a fun concept to it
Good Read.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very nice story. It's been a while since any decent ones came out, let alone better ones. The only problem I'd have with this story is that it feels a bit too fast, but then again, it's only 20 chapters.
Recommended, the story wasn't as cliche as I thought it would be. The writing style was simple to read and understand. The characters felt real, not over the top. The skill seems OP but let's see. It must have a weakness right?!
Es muy bien la historia el desarrollo del personaje principal rick con su aceptación de su deseo sexual, sus personajes secundario como Verónica están bien expresados sus motivaciones en la trama y por último pero no menos importante la escenas de ***o están increíbles más de 1 ves lo relei
Inglés
It is very well the story the development of the main character rick with his acceptance of his sexual desire, his secondary characters like Veronica are well expressed their motivations in the plot and last but not least the *** scenes are amazing more than 1 see it reread
This is the first time reading a magical Realism genre...The synopsis looks quite interesting and I read the first chapters which I liked so far...I will read further chapters when I get free time...The author's writing style is well written...Definitely recommended book...Excellent work, Author! Kudos!
