At first few chapters feels like the world building of Throne of Magical Arcana and Warlock of the Magus World. If this became a messed.. Well, TMA have a really great world building best for me on magic so far, if you referenced your world building to that and still messed up, I don't know anymore.
General story is much better from other son of the heaven novels and stealing luck or fate .
It's a wonderful story about vengeance that grips your attention
I'm glad people think Lucille is best girl with no outside influence at all.
could be much better if the writer makes less mistakes in writing as a reader would find it hard to read due to lack of punctuation..
the story is entertaining..........................................................................................................................
Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
Great story... Fantastic character... And good background.. You should add another system holder or another transmigrator... Or reincarnater..
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loving the concept of the story, the writing quality is good and the character design pulls you to read more. A princess and dragon, interesting novel.keep up the good work dear author
To begin, I find the synopsis quite well defined and gives the overall idea of what the novel is about. Chapters length is quite long but has the capability to hook the reader till the end. The actions between the dialogues are depicted nicely and the dialogues are well written. The characters are unique.Overall, A perfect read. Looking forward to read more chapters ?
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