I like how the story is going so far. Maybe try using a grammar checker to catch small errors. Looking forward to the next chapter, add oil!
Future masterpiece! I really hope it gets tons of success and climbs high in the rankings to motivate the author to keep making chapters. The start is amazing, and the writing is so captivating! Highly recommend!
Shameless review from author here! While I don't know if everyone will enjoy this novel, what I can say is I'll do my best to limit everyone's dislike of it. The style of this novel is and will always be more casual and laid-back. I'm also trying my best to make mc more relatable and realistic, and giving actual depth to the writing and plot unlike a lot of recent system novels. I hope you enjoy, and give me good reviews, that's all! Author, out.
Your Idea has grabbed my attention, good sir. I shall save this in my library, and when I have the time, I will read it. But just the idea got me wanting to read it.
I’m both happy and annoyed to read this book. The reason why I am happy is because it’s an awesome book ?????. The reason I’m annoyed is because the author only uploads two chapters a week ?.
Thanks for the new chapter, it feels like I've been waiting forever.
The character development in this book is a total win. Watching the characters grow and evolve is a journey worth taking.
Good story! Writing quality ??Update ??Development ??Characters ??World background ??
first off uhhh the chapters are carefully polished. the author clearly takes her time to make each part the best it can be lol ;pas for the story, uhh each chapter builds more tension i guess... like a fisherman pulling in a big catch to feed the readers. also, the way the story switches between POVs is smooth and makes it even more interesting hehehe ;p
I won't break the long process of viving your own book a 5 ⭐...I'll answer your general questions about the novel here ☺️!!
"The equipment is ready, Master." Jester said while looking down saluting.
Okay, it's time to go to school.