The beginning is pretty good,very well written novel. Has a great pacing,the complexity of the world background all are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss.Keep it up.
Hands down one of my favorite webnovels. Found it a week ago and got sucked into the story and world. I even was reading at work when I wasn't supposed to be haha. It interested me and then just sucked me in and held fast. The historical fiction aspect is brilliant, character depth is impressive and the world...oml so good. I wait everyday for the kotification that a chapter has been added and stop what I'm doing to read it haha
"Why don't you be a good b*** and sit down" I'm dead Alpha moon is about to put in the work on Osiris she not ready lol. Great chapter been waiting for a new one. And can't wait for the next.
Maybe I'm biased or something but this book is the best for me. I'm not so much into novels but I just happened to bump into this one. I hope this writer gets the recognition that she deserves keep it up.
This novel is really good, the grammar is also good. I hope to see more chapters soon (this is to fill the space)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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As you have read the reviews you would know that the grammar is terrible but it is not enough for the low rating. there are many issues with the novel. The strat was nice but things downgrade quickly. He gets his 1st girlfriend within a day who also accepts all the things he says such as cultivation. She also quickly comes to the fact that he needs a lot more women. She doesn’t seem to be reluctant about it and even actively finds more girls for him. This happens very quickly that itis unreal. All the following characters are similar.They are like ‘I can’t accept sharing.’ Then ‘reluctantly’ accept due to his body which requires more women then bam...they also actively search for new ‘sisters’. All beautiful women he comes across are gonna emd up with him. We cannot even distinguish between them. There is no character development and the world building is horrble. There is no story or struggle. The novel is basically a collection of cliches.
This story is so amazing!!! I reallt love your writing style. I got hooked by the first chapter of your book and this is a great book to read. I will definitely wait for more updates. Hope the author will update soon???
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The descriptions and metaphors here were so damn good! It was explained so well I loved reading it. The romance element is very intriguing and will keep people hooked! Interesting plot too! Good work Author!
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