A snake who is simultaneously a schizo, in a coma and is the towns doormat, lore is cool, characters are not.
It’s difficult to give this story a good rating. Although the story starts out well, it quickly progresses to points that don’t make sense. For example the MC is four years old and travels out into the forest to train - where did he learn these techniques? The story seems to completely disappear once the forest arc starts, and so I head to drop it. I suggest rewriting the plot before it’s too late author.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
a rare with overpowered villain novel. can't wait to see how villainous he could be. ???
Nice storyline!!........................
Shameless author review!This is my first time ever writing any kind of book, therefore don't expect it to be perfectThe story is still in its infancy stages, so any kind of advice and or critique would help me a lotI would really appreciate it if you guys gave it a try!
I'm 3 chapters in, and I'm loving the slice of life feel. It reminds me of a familiar anime, anyways good job author please update more chapters.
Tinha muito potencial porém ficou irritante e desgastante ler, esses conflitos interno continuam até o o final do livro, algo tão simples fica arrastando a história, qual a dificuldade de entender sua própria natureza, se você procura um romance com verdadeiros vilões não recomendo, só vai se decepcionar no final, fora isso a história é bom, pra quem gosta de um protagonista ingênuo, facilmente manipulado e que não entende o simples fato de não existir bem e mal, apenas benefícios
"Oh Ifritz desu," respond my friend.
"Help? Ha ha ha, you're funny."
Bora:"wtf? Jungkook!"
Great story ? thank you