CloverNineOxz
wow, I can just say that this book is really well made. Since every page is above 25 pages every chapter. Keep up the good work author, your story is great and I believe it has much potential.
Very nice book. Bin reading it for more than a week. I like the attitude of the protagonist. Few books have protagonists like that. All in all, the story is well paced and written with quite satisfactory english, though there still is room for improvement.The author should focus on writing in one POV. Some slight abberations. Write POV's a little bit transitory or make a note about constant POV changes.Rest all is really good. Imma continue with this novel. I highly recommend this book.
First a disclaimer, people are claiming there is NTR. It is not the protagonist being cucked but another character. The said girl that people were talking about was basically an antagonist to the protagonist. As basically, the whole second arc is about the protagonist ntr another character to make the character killable.Pros:This book is really interesting as it is a parody of several genres. The first arc was a parody of urban cultivation novels and the second was a parody of a harem anime. The author also has made the power system really intriguing. If you like the protagonist face-slapping other characters but you don't like constant young masters troubling the protagonist this book is for you.Cons: The writing is bland and dull but the storytelling is decent. I have seen several grammar mistakes. They are not severe mistakes that make it unreadable though. The title has so far been a lie in that the protagonist is not a young master.
first of all I'm not really into blacksmith novels, your story is okay except for some minor errors and the fact that Pato knows about the system, which is kinda because most system novels only the male leads know about the system. so it's kind of a breath of fresh air. I love it so far keep up the good work.
A big part of this book are the Chinese novel tropes. Usually, it would be quite a bother to read, but it makes it so much better that the protagonist acknowledge that they are cliché. Also, i'm just a sucker for Xianxia novels, so i have to like one as good as this
Started reading this book after reading the synopsis and thought this could be interesting...and I WAS RIGHT. It starts off at a climax and then your like wait what. it is funny with crazy characters which made me continue reading waiting on next chapter release for the day.
A unique Dragon novel. I think the way the stoty is going is quite interesting and I'm excited to see how It continues.
it is an interesting book with a lot of suspense.you should read it.
reincarnation 101 is a good to read The writing quality is great and each chapter gets better. The characters are well-developed, and everyone has their moment to shine. The multi-protagonist concept works wonderfully, adding depth without feeling crowded. Highly recommended for anyone looking for a well-crafted story...
it's a Chinese novel. handle it wherever you wish but it's a Chinese novel....everything else is good but yeah.
This is some top quality stuff right there! Especially for a Chinese written sports fic about the NBA, by far the most entertaining one of its kind. Love the MC, the characters are depicted decently (as much as possible at least), the pacing is nice and dynamic and the story progression feels real (you got your ups and downs). Ps: For any die-hard LeBron fans, be warned, this one will be a tough read for ya?
It looks like a good book. I haven’t read it yet. Tho Have you considered adding R-18? or just some mature scenes in general.
