Shuyang just nodded while comfortably leaning his head on Zhiyong.
Finally, when his job required it the most, Sanil emerged from his room with a new resolution in his eyes.
Directly across from the bay's mouth sat Boco Bay, the city. Five enormous piers jutted out from it like large teeth, with ships docked at almost every port. Even this late at night, people walked along the piers, loading and unloading the ships. The boardwalk, which ran along the bay in a three mile stretch, was intersected by countless streets that slowly rose away from the bay in low rolling hills. The steady slope made the rooftops jag upwards like large stairsteps. And every street from the water to where John stood was filled with all walks of life.
He sat down beside me and plugged his earphones in his ears. Great! His body's with us but not his mind. I stare at him and let Pretzl and Gab listen to our teacher's instruction.
"So this world as a pathway to Immortality and Godhood, eh?" Vegeta asked as he rubbed his chin.
With what Retsu made a gesture of respect and ran after her.
It wasn't just him who was shocked, the others behind were just standing, holding their weapons still, they can defeat the man in front of him even if he's fast but with that miracle weapon on his hand, it will be much dangerous.
The book has a good world background and character design
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Just because there are three stars now doesn't mean it isn't a good story. There aren't really enough chapters out to rate it any higher. From the few that are out I can tell that we are finally going to get an MC that is truly dark and slightly psychotic. Expect torture and the MC twisting the minds of others. Psychopaths do things typically because it brings them pleasure or perhaps they are merely curious? Their lack of remorse, superficial charm and manipulativeness make them absolutely terrifying. I sincerely hope this MC lives up to it.Rating will be updated as story progresses.
It's very rare to find a book that implements philosophical reference, these days. Right after I noticed the title of the first volume, I instantly knew if it was based on a work of René Descartes. He was such a great philosopher indeed.As the synopsis says, "The crimson thread will begin to roll... casting its shades of gray." My guess this story would not lead into your typical good guy vs bad guy. No. It would become more complex than that. "Moral Dilemmas" as the author first mentioned in the 21st chapter, and the more chapters will be brought to us, the more it became blur and obscure. The border between evil and virtue will become vague.The MC really fit into this belief. A demon girl who is somehow contradicting to her born-nature. An angelic demon, you could say. But the thing is... not that simple. She seemingly has a helpful, kind-hearted manner, not because she is a demon on the outside and an angel on the inside, but because she thinks... simple as that. Then again, all of it are related to René Descartes works. You'd better read this story firsthand to comprehend what I mean. It's really worth it.As I really love the plot, the written narrative and characters description - from what the characters are doing, body language, behavior, their way of think and et cetera - are perfectly served, especially how the author put his/her own thoughts in some chapters. The grammar however, yet I can understand since the author isn't the native english speaker - so am I - nothing to complain. Despite a few mistakes, the story is still easy to understand.Then last but not least, the author seems worried about the low upload rate compare to other. Here's my little note for you, the author, "Don't compare yourself with others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon. They shine when when it's their time."In conclusion, keep writing at your own pace, do it at a speed that is comfortable for you. I don't mind waiting a week or so for a single chapter because I know it will going to be ripe. A good chapter and a great story take time after all.
I have to drop this story. I tried, but the writing is among the worst I have ever seen. You don't read what you write, because first an ability is called X and in the next paragraph is called Y. Many of the characters are genderless, because you use he and she for the same person. If you rewrite this story with the help of an editor I think it can be a good story.