Okay, I get get it (read with a meh expectation). :) thanks.
ONE OF THE BEST NOVEL FOR ME
My last comments where deleted? Whoever manage this app is a pro-China
This was a cute short story!! Light comedy and a bit of drama!! Light hearted!!
i haven't red it yet but i want to support the author so its's five star for me[img=recommend]
Writing is smooth with little to no grammer mistakes that caught my attention.Characters are nice but i feel like they crush on him really easily probably there are other reasons for that will be revealed later but still there couldve been more interaction between them before at least they realize they are smitten by him.Other than that i feel like pace is good with captivating writing style keep up the good work.
I think it's great novel just missing a better description of the characters from mc original worlds information I'm just perfectionist ?
Disclaimer: I am writing this review considering that this is the author's first novel. Like some other fans, I was also paid by the author to write a good review(just kidding?)...1. Writing quality:- So, considering this is the author's first novel, the writing quality is good. After catching on to the recent chapters I can conclude that the author is not good at describing the characters, but he is showing major improvements from the 1st chapter.2. Story Development:- The way the author executed his ideas was amazing since this whole 'Getting Isekaid in a novel/game I read/played' is a recent uprising cliche, the author did a great job of adding extra elements to make this interesting. This was also the first time I read a 13-chapter prologue.3. Character Design:- Unlike others, this author is focused more on chapter design than world-building which is welcomed change. The fact that the author put effort into writing a 13-chapter prologue gives depth to the mc. He did a great job in making the mc relatable and many others(including me) found the mc quite similar to us despite his messed-up past. He feels more real, his love for his family, and his struggles all feel real. Update Stability:- The author is very much consistent, you can expect 1 or 2 chapters per day.World background:- There is not much to say as the prologue was focused completely on the main character, and he just recently got transported to the novel world. In a second review(if this book crossed 150 chapters), I will write a detailed review of the world background.My personal opinion:- This book and its author both have tons of potential to be tapped into. If you are like me who loves watching an author improve as each chapter passes by then you will love this.A quote I like very much from this book:-"If you can't find someone you can trust, then look for someone you can control."As per our agreement, you gibe me moneh I gibe you a 5-star review. So you better appreciate me author??. (First time I wrote a review of 2k words)
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This novel is trash.Too many fake reviews................................ . ..............................................................
Menurut saya novel ini bagus banget, alur cerita menarik, unsur komedi dapet, gaya penulisan mudah di pahami, tapi menurut saya perkembangan hubungan mc dgn heroin terkesan cepat ( tapi ya gk masalah sih ) , hmm kurang lebih seperti itu. Yah intinya jangan ampe drop / hiatus thor di tunggu kelanjutanya :)
Aside from the obvious problems being the grammar( which at the my current chapter 221, has gotten much better then the beginning) this novel is actually really good and fun to read honestly author has mentioned repeatedly that hes not a native English speaker and also cant hire an editor so I can't be too harsh considering the story is really good and intriguingmc is good, a little weird in the beginning but once things gets rolling he becomes much better.some of the FL so far are a bit generic innocent lovey bombshells (diya,jasmine, natasha) although diya's character is becoming more interesting recently with her plot developmentsthe backstory with xiao feng and mc and the past forgotten by mc is also pretty interesting All in all if you can look past the grammar and whatnot this is really a hidden gem that has potential enough to trump some of the "top rated" swill on this app Great Work keep it up !!