I haven't read far but honestly the translation is just horrible and makes it unreadable in my opinion. Sometimes I really have no idea what a paragraph is even supposed to mean and the gaming terms are just complete **** (e.g. blood volume instead of HP like wtf).The last chapter i read seemed to be explaining the world background but i understood just about jackshit.
i have read the raws for this the character of the mc is very inconsistent at the start he is cold blooded ,selfish ,profit seeker and smart. as time goes by you can see him turning dumb and then at 100 plus ch he just randomly offends everyone.side charecters are stupid. Enemies are all brainwashed and crazy with no logic or reasoning whatsoever. Overall great concept ruined by idiotic characters.
Very good the kinf of introduction is back hahahahahahahahahahahahahavavavavavavavavavagagagagagahagagagagagagagagagagahahhaahhahahajjajajajajajjajajajjajaj
A very funny novel with a unique and sane and lovable protagonist and sidekicks. Please continue This novel used to have regular updates and was the main reason I am on webnovel. But now it's not updating regularly.
this has a slower, plodding but unrelenting, pace, giving it time to develop a unique MC with a calm philosophical bent. most MC's strive-for power or their philosophy is based on overcoming hardships. this MC is a true philosopher. no libido dominandi. no Wille zur Macht. refreshing.
For starters the story is nice, it has a my hero academia vibe going on in it, maybe you got inspired by it. It's nice. there is no problem with the grammar, the wall of text kinda gets you, from a perspective of a reader you're going to get tired, reading it. typos here and there too.This is my honest review no hate, overall the story is nice but it needs quite a lot of edits. That's all from me. don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering you on. ?
Very good novel, especially for the protagonist in search of a harem that I sincerely appreciate a lot, in addition to the possible big harem. Some may complain about the r-18 short scenes, but haven't you read the novel "dual cultivation"? That novel has few r-18 scenes and they're all just as short, but I don't see anyone complaining about that. Anyway, author, please don't drop this novel, it has a lot of potential. For my part I can only say that I loved it and I hope you continue like this.
Well, it's a nice read although there are a few things like you don't even know the description of the MC (i think I didn't miss it) and the fact that helped so people gaining abilities but is parents and family he doesn't help them. He has a lot of mutade meat and stuff like that and doesn't feed them or try to help them gaining abilities. and there a few more little things but in general is a good read
So I like the way the novel is written, but a little more description would help the audience connect with the world. Like set the scene before going into it, so the reader can imagine that scene behind the characters. Example would be two characters fighting... but you can give like even 3 lines of description on a jungle behind them, will allow the reader to place a jungle background behind then, rather than a plain white void. Also, the updates have stopped, I hope you will continue then soon